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I'm addicted to coffee too. I liked the logic of your tale. Your characters are full on dimmension. At times, the character is like a little child. How much time that Muffin is on the streets? I think that Muffin have only 13 to 15 year and said 20 for the social workers.

If you think about your have a very good point. On the one hand he have some time living on the streets. But at the same time, if you have more important needs like wjhat I'm going to eat or where I going to sleep, learn and practice the sex does not make much sense. I love your work, thanks for sharing.

Really very good this chapter. The time between Asher and Muffin is very interesting. Why it's so spoiled muffin with the housekeeper?

EH? I'm with you Muffin; who is Mr. Alex???

Haha. So now that Muffin isn't stuck on the streets trying to beat the odds of "survival of the fittest" and in the warm loving care of Asher Pickett he's learning that woody's are becoming a regular fixture of his morning schedule.Oh dear, we better get Asher to do something about that, Right? I had to google obdurate since I had no idea what it meant but after reading the definition I had to grin. Definitely a delicious, obdurate muffin indeed. Although I still feel like I'm walking around with ADHD; muffin's definitely delicious but his thought processes whiz by from one thing to another so fast its beyond funny. Anyhoo I just spent hours putting your message through my highly intelligent decoder program (it nearly broke down) but it finally managed to unscramble where you live. I won't tell you exactly when I'm going to ransack you (afterall its all about the surprise factor), but I've got handcuffs on the ready and a years supply of muffins to help get you by. lol

OMG OMG!!! I went into this small bakery called Muffin's Muffin and got a poppy seed muffin!!!!! I'm so not making this up...

Aaanywayyyyy.... I love this chapter, needless to say. I hope Asher makes Michael sorry for what he did. Not kill him though.....

Hmmm... Alex, huh? What kind of a muffin is THAT? *grin* Oh I enjoyed so many things in this chapter, I don't know where to start... but the "interogation" has to be my all time fav... poor kid! err... well.. kinda...

To see a character I like (Muffin) in pain makes me mad....so I felt he should have been able to escape and fight not just tried.....!
but I think Asher is more than able to do that....I´m waiting for the revenge...happily :)
Oh and more fights on the bed would be wonderful, after all Asher has a long way to go to tame Muffin even a bit!
Asher picked a nice name for Muffin out!?!

Oh I forgot to say: I can´t wait for the chapter when Muffin finally has to say ´please´
:)

Oh em gee! You've done it again! I think Asher is so sadistically sexy I can't wait to see what else he has to teach muffin!

I hate myself...I missed an update! I'm going to cry now. Okay, finished crying.

Yeah! Up to date now.

Just one question-> Who the hell is Asher? I, mean, really. There are just too many facets to his personality!

And that cliffie! Did Asher find out Muffin's real name?