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OMG, I completely fell in love with this story when I found it and read it. Somehow I really love how stubborn Muffin is. It sort of reminds me of an angry kitten attacking a lion whenever he tries to confront Asher. It is soooo adorable. You're doing a great job and I can't wait for your next update.

NO! Noooo! That's WRONG! i must object, very STRONGLY against Ashers educational skills. You should NOT skip lessons like that! How is poor Muffin ever gonna learn if you do!? BAD Asher! Go sit on the naughty-chair! And take Muffin with you!

There! That told him! ;o) GREAT chapter... I just love Muffin and I'm so amazed about how his brain/mouth filter just... dosen't work at all... *lol* It's so much fun to read! And the computer-thing... OMG I laughed until I cried...Oh, I liked the "August"-thing! *grin* I'm off to read Monsoon now...

(7) I've only just started to read your story even though Night Writer has mentioned it in Monsoon before but I wasn't sure that it would be something I would find interesting. Well I'm certainly glad I decided to give it a try because so far I'm really liking it, unfortunately I've only had time to get to ch7 but hopefully over the weekend I'll get all caught up :) Muffin is rather cute in a bratty way and I was glad to see that he really did leave, I was afraid it was going to be one of those stories where he decides to stay even though Asher's been rather abusive to him and everything was just fine. As for Asher I'm reserving judgement till I can read the rest because right now he just seems like a spoiled guy who gets whatever he wants, however he wants with no consideration to what the person wants. Holding a guy hostage(for lack of a better word) for saving your life really doesn't seem like the best way to pay him back, I'm hoping when I get to the other chapters I'll get to see him actually asking what it is Muffin wants instead of just assuming he knows what's best. All right now I have to go before I'm late but I look forward to reading the rest of this later :)

Love this story. I read all of it in one night. Can't wait for more

I dont mind being kept in the dark. That just means I'll be super enthralled when dear muffin learns those lessons. Who knew had such a nympho side to him...asher was a little shocked too hahaha! He's a spicy cinnamon muffin!

And another awesome chapter. XD
Poor Muffin, Asher always leaves him hanging high and dry. ;-)
But finally there was some more action in this chapter and
I think Asher might be losing some of his cool. =^.^=
Well, what questions could I ask if it's not about Muffin's past...
how about how old he is (I'd guess 16-18 years) or if Asher is one of those
Mafia guys or maybe just working for some government (then again the police wouldn't hunt him)...

Alright, I'm just going to wait (not so) patiently until you answer the questions on your own. :D

Please keep up the great work.

Chapter One

Okay, I must admit. With a name like Muffin, I thought this could be nothing more then fluffy fluffety fluff. I don't like fluff... Am I full of prejudice or what? Well, I though with as many reviews and hits like that, something should be good about the story, or the world just craved for fluffyness.

I'm glad I gave it a chance. It's awesome :D I've only read one chapter, but if the following is written in the same styl, I have no, none and nada complaints #^____^# I'll go and read the rest now ^^ E he he hihi. (Why did I just get the craving to go and see Tokyo Godfathers..?)

Muffin Rocks!

You updated! Yay!
You know, I bought a muffin today, a really delicious chocolate muffin with peppermint rocks in it and dark chocolate at top. And when I got home, you had updated. Muffins are magical, aren't they? ^^

so Monday was depressing BUT!! a mid week update is hella awesome WOO!!!

I know all about them dar nasty papers as I too am in the middle of writing some.....and clue roxs!

"People named their kids Sunshine, August, America, Kitty and even Mercedes but Muffin..." You just had to say August now did you? XDDD

and Yes muffin. there's nothing wrong with muffin as a name. I mean hey! I know a kid by the name of Danish! and that's a dessert too!

and honestly... Muffin knows movies... he's like always referring to movies... Was he like some movie-go-er back when he was a normal kid? and it seem's he was really into google too XD

. and--GAH!HAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHHAHAHHAHAHA!!!! OMG! STOP STOP! you gotta make muffin STOP! He's making me burst out laughing with everytime he open's his mouth! XDDDDD
GOD! HAHAHHAHAHAH!!!! XDD Like, what's the deal with saying "penis" .... "penis"... OI! MUFFIN! how old are you?!?! XDDDD he's behaving like some middle school kid or something? XDDD

'how the birds and bees actually exchanged the seed process'? wow! I've only heard the first part, but now 'exchanging the the seed process?????' XDDD good one! XD omg you crack me up! XD

and just when I thought I calmed down from all that laughter... you go had muffin search up about gay sex in a meeting conference!????!?!?!!!! GOD!!! WAHAHAHHAHA!!! OMG THE EMBARRASSMENT!?!?!??! XDDDD

"Everyone could see my screen."

like HELL YEA!!!! XDFDDDDDDd GAH MUFFIN! YOU WIN!!! PWNAGE!!! i wonder what the heck those people were thinking!!! XDDDD
did it NOT cross their minds that Mr. Pickett's "friend" was searching up porn during the meeting??? XDDD So much about that being and boring business affair! XD

nice nice nice. *sighs* ah, gotta catch my breath... lolzzzz XD
and then people.. we move onto with the "TUTORIAL" ~

LEsson 1
Kissing~

sweet heavens! XDDDDD This is the type of school you DO NOT want to miss! and whoa! what's this? fast-track school? we're at -

LEsson 2
Foreplay

already?! no practice session? no homework before the next lesson? XDDD and hey! what? foreplay is stimulation? I would call foreplay 'getting in the mood' XD or second base! XD

and from lesson 2, it looked like they had jumped to lesson 4 and were going to take the final exam unprepared~ XD
but lucky for muffin, asher's taken such an exam before so he knows that studying and practising all the lessons before hand would do you good... XDDDDD

and huh? har? waht? what "Lesson four. I'm the teacher" HUUUUHHH???
Seeenseeeeeiii!!! I think you skipped lesson three, what was that? Was I absent?

.... seriously... what IS lesson three?

because I think what you think and what I am thinking is completely different so you have to let me know what is it that you think so that i wont confuse it with what i think, you think you get me now?

hehe =D yeaaaa i purposely did that~ XD

Whooot whooot!!! XD

oneward! onward!!!

next chapter... lesson three muffin! hehe, that's not a flavour. what about.... vanilla muffin?... or whip cream muffin... or.... mayonaise? XDDDD
hahhhhahahahhahahaha XDDDD

and gah aaaw mahsa... give yourself more credit yea? you don't suck ~ *pat's ya on the back* I forgot what I was confused about already ^___^
and so far, this chapter was perfectly understandable~ XD not confusing at all~ in fact, very educational... I mean, hey! we went through TWO WHOLE LESSONS (make that three, since there was a lesson four right? XD ), whithin a single chapter!
hey if you were teacher, your kids would finnish elementary and high school in 5 years! XD it's the express stream! XD


anyway, speaking of desserts...
I made strawberry cheesecake today! Here have a slice *hands a slice to Mahsa*
enjoy~ ^____^


- nekoii