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OMG "gay bareback sex" I almost barked out laughing in the middle of the night =)) LOL and then, after my laughter'd subsided, I felt sooooooooooo embarrassed (cuz when i read, i like to live with the characters ^^). pff. Now Asher knows Muffin's curiosity, he has all the advantages *snicker* start with the lessons *laugh* Poor Muffin, you have a smart mouth but too naive, you lose heheh. Now you make my imagination run wild xP.
And dear, for your awesomeness, I drew *jump* you inspired me. I dont have a scanner thou so I have to use my cellphone, it looked weird so I tried to make it look better, I think it still look weird x.x
http://i120.photobucket.com/albums/o184/azalyk/Muffin.jpg

Ahaha.
This story really is amazing.

Asher stinks. He totally should have stayed.
Although, now I can't wait for the next chapter!

Ooooohh....ooohh my gaawwd.....I really FELT muffin's embarassment in this one!!! Seriously lol, something like that computer incident is my worst nightmare. And regarding reviews, so you saw that thread on my y gal page huh? LOL Since I'm not a writer myself, I figure the least I can do is give out recs, as I know I am always looking for entertaining and well written stuff. This story just gets better and better, please update soon!

Damn i am hooked!! You have a great talent.. Keep up the good work!!

eeeeee!! You are too good at that cliffhanger kind of thing! I swear it! Can't wait for your next chapter. Are you running out of names for muffins yet? :3

Haha you are such a tease. I can't believe I was left hanging with 'Who the heck is Alex?' in the last chapter and it was just a fake name for muffin. And now we're left hanging with lesson 3 except I think we all know where that's going except poor or should I say lucky Muffin. Naughty Naughty! I'm glad to see Muffin and I are on the same page; google totally rocks (especially for us illiterate peoples!). And does your writing confuse me -> NO, but do I still feel like I'm going ADHD-> YES. It's more credit to you to be able to create a character who can have so much chaos going on in his head but at the same time make it comprehensible and highly amusing. I generally love people who seem to bounce from one idea to the next with no coherent line of thought; it makes life fun! I wish your disclaimer was a falsie though; how exciting would it be to have a Muffin running around (I would stalk him too if I could just get past Asher Pickett's bodyguards! lol). I fell in love with Asher just a little bit more in this banana muffin; something more human about him. I thought we were getting a slow chapter at first (probably a good thing after all the previous action) but the boardroom scene was a blast. I think Asher is going to have to take full advantage of Muffin while he's still in that naive stage because once he gets the hang of how the real bad world works (and knowing Muffin and his curiosity that won't take long) I thinks Muffin is going to pull a couple over Asher's eyes. By the way I was totally camouflaged in my bear suit so there is no way you could have spotted me and we wouldn't have this kidnapping issue between us if you just stayed on that computer and kept on typing... ;p Can't wait for the next muffin! *hint hint* hehe

arghh, you big tease, just when I was about to throw confetti around...so close, so very close...another great chapters, it's great that whatever that is between Asher and Muffin hitting off quite good and can't hardly wait for the promised end of the week 8D.poor muffin...or lucky him hahaha
aand, the part that you've been waiting for I think...bathroom scene fan-manga here: http://s73.photobucket.com/albums/i239/ngakirakira/muffin/
I only managed to coughed out only 4 pages this time(the weather is quite lovely lately, so, yeah, not much coughing going on xd), and those pages are only a fraction of the whole scene, so, heh, I think this will be a whole oneshot with oh, I dunno, 12 pages on it? so, I hope I can upload 1-2 new pages every other day(night) or at least a revision of the pages
anyway, tell me what do you think of it, is the flow between page 1,2,3 too jumpy?,do I omit too many parts?,muffin's face too varied from page to page?,the paneling is bad? anything to make this fan-manga better...but I hope you would like and enjoy them...so, see you next post XD

cheers

I have been enjoying this story and the plot is excellent. I think that there is an overload of angst and frustration in the story. I have lost sympathy with Muffin because he is too frustrated. Someone needs to have sex with this boy. It's been thirteen chapters already. Muffin is walking around like a cat in heat and he has become annoying and boring. He really is becoming a bitch. He lost me when he told the maid Jenny that her boss kept trying to touch his penis. I was like "Okay. Somebody shoot this boy!" I also cannot realistically see how or why a man like Asher would hold out for so long. He must be having sex somewhere else. I think that it is not necessary to overload the story with sex but even if Muffin is a virgin, he seriously needs to get some action. Even some rough sex with Michael. Anything to get him to stop bitching.

oh godddd... I just finished reading cranberry muffin, and I have to tell you, I cried like a little baby. I could not stop the tears. That was so sad. You captured the feeling perfectly though. That's exactly how it feels when you lose your best friend in the whole world.

You're a fantastic writer!! I'm glad I found your story. It's delicious.

This chapter had me laughing. The best scene: when he realized that everyone from Asher's board meeting could see him googling gaybarebacksex.com!

Funny, sad, funny, sad. Wonderful writing and a great emotional roller coaster ride!