rate_review Reviews

Hi! I really love this story. I find the whole plot incredibly captivating. I was rereading it for the zillionth time and I think Chapter 17 might have been replaced for a later chapter during editing. I thought I should give you a heads up! Keep up the good work!

Hello, Masha! This is my first time reviewing a story, and I can honestly say it's one I was looking forward to writing. I'm not one to re-read a story; even if I enjoyed it, but I found myself hopelessly unable to avoid the urge to re-read yours. It seemed like a good fix while I waited for more Matthew updates. That being said, I see no reason why you couldn't get your work published, if you so desired. The story line is riveting and the constant cliffhangers left me wanting to know what was going to happen next. I guess I could be considered lucky I started reading Muffin after you were finished, since I had the pleasure of reading to my hearts content. Thank you for the amazing story, and I hope you continue to write in the future!

This was one of the most absorbing and addictive reads I have had in a while. So beautifully written, I could feel every emotion and ache Muffin was experiencing. Thank you!

First time reading this. It was odd at first but grew on me. I love it now. The poor dog though! And poor Muffin! But the banana muffin chapter...I laughed SO HARD. It made up totally from all the mental abuse from the previous chapters. Good read.

I'm going to say this and you will shrug it off as an exaggeration; but, I love this story. I think you should have an editor look at it and try to publish it. It has some issues, but that's what editing is for. Anyway, hearts and shit!

I think what you want Ash to do is pinch Muffin's penis, right below the head. It would have the desired effect. Not much editing needed. The reason pinching off the vas deferens is that when men ejaculate, it comes from their prostate, not their testicles. What you're suggesting happened would do nothing but possibly be painful. It's possible to stop ejaculation, just not in the way you're suggesting.

I don't know what you used for translating italian (probably google trans *yuck* - TOTALLY intentional :D ), but is REALLY off. You know, strange phrases that no one really uses anymore. Anyway, I love this story, and I have already read all Matthew's chapters. But I wanted to tell you this, just so you know.. not for gloating, just for being.. err, how can I say it, .. hair-splitting? :) the pain-in-the-arse fussy! xD

Hi,

I just was checking out to see if 'Matthew' had been updated since I last read it and to my complete horror have found it's gone!!!!

What happened? Where did it go? Will it be back? I loved that story. I hope you are ok and nothing bad has happened to you.

P.S.

It's me again, sorry to bother you, but I even checked your author panel to see if you mentioned anything about 'Matthew' being taken down for some reason but you haven't so I am hoping it will be back.

Pretty please!!!

A green car and everything... oh, Muffin, you idiot.