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March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE UPDATE!
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March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Action! Plot! My eyes! My eyes! *LOL* Great chapter! My pulse went up dangerously during the car-ride... *takes deep breaths*
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March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah the glorious Mysterious little Muffin a perfect match for the inscrutable big boss...this story always pleases and makes me want more...especially to devour, each and every last wee crumb whether sweet or sour, so babe write faster my impatience knows no bound! A Fan, G
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March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Heehee, I loved this chapter, even though there was limited smut. Mostly I love how Muffin keeps suprising Asher with his intellegence. Also, I adored how Muffin instigated that innocent little kiss, like he wasn't sure what else to do. He's so awkward! ^____^ I totally approve of awkwardlytakinginitiative!Muffin. Also, how in the name of hell is Muffin ever going to get back into a car now? TWICE he's taken a dip in the water while in a car. I was in a rollover on the freeway once, and it was really difficult to get back into a car... that, and I had flashbacks at the most RANDOM points in the road! And nobody died while I was in that car, (just broke my pelvis in a couple places) but poor Muffin! It's no wonder he's so snarky.
I'm glad you have many more muffin names stashed away (I've never heard of ginger muffins before, I'll have to try some) and I can't wait to see what the lemon chapter is called! ^____^ Both lemon and banana have already been taken, so it must be a doozy. *grins* This and Monsoon are my two favorite stories on AFF. Keep up the good work! Your writing and story-telling rocks!
~MM
I'm glad you have many more muffin names stashed away (I've never heard of ginger muffins before, I'll have to try some) and I can't wait to see what the lemon chapter is called! ^____^ Both lemon and banana have already been taken, so it must be a doozy. *grins* This and Monsoon are my two favorite stories on AFF. Keep up the good work! Your writing and story-telling rocks!
~MM
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March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hot - the temperature....yeah sure :) hahhaahha
waiting at the door to get out...............I just waited for him to scratch at the door like a cat :)
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these two have my pity... why? that´s easy, everytime their wounds start to heel something bad happens.....
my opinion: they need more time for each other!Alone! :)
Like always already waiting for more (and I just read that chapter....oh my....I´m greedy...)
waiting at the door to get out...............I just waited for him to scratch at the door like a cat :)
and
these two have my pity... why? that´s easy, everytime their wounds start to heel something bad happens.....
my opinion: they need more time for each other!Alone! :)
Like always already waiting for more (and I just read that chapter....oh my....I´m greedy...)
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March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A great chapter. it's so nice to see Muffin acting like, well, Muffin =^-^=
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March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Finally! Yes!! I have waited all week for this chapter, and I have been checking like five times a day for the past three days! I can't believe Muffin hasn't broken down yet, he is like right at the edge - I hope he'll be okay. Oh well, if he cracks then I'm sure Asher will be there to take care of him! Please update again soon !
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March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh, Mahsa! -anna's stile- where have you been? i was so worried! why are you wet? were you in the back seat when the car crashed? or did you just take a bath?...
now asher is drinking part por his own chocolate! it was the time!
it was not that bad! remember: when you feel down about not feeling your writting is good (but it is, perhaps it's harder for me to understand because i'm still learning english), just think 'hey! it could be worse! It could be a weird-commercial-kid's book!'
(ejem, the car scene somehow remids me of the lil' brother of a friend playing Grand Theft Auto...XD the diference was that he was riding an helicopter and almost crashed the statue of liberty in process...come to think of it, why do i feel like it's alike?)
keep going!
now asher is drinking part por his own chocolate! it was the time!
it was not that bad! remember: when you feel down about not feeling your writting is good (but it is, perhaps it's harder for me to understand because i'm still learning english), just think 'hey! it could be worse! It could be a weird-commercial-kid's book!'
(ejem, the car scene somehow remids me of the lil' brother of a friend playing Grand Theft Auto...XD the diference was that he was riding an helicopter and almost crashed the statue of liberty in process...come to think of it, why do i feel like it's alike?)
keep going!
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March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter, it was one of your best chapters...
some plot, something funny...something sexy :)
and that means I need more!
....bareback.com I was laughing my ass of.....my roommate even came in to ask what happened!
Muffin was a real bitch...the poor maid, but I´m sure she will survive :)
And just like Muffin I´m waiting for the end of the week :)
PS no jokes about Germans and Jews please! I´m living in Germany at the moment....I´m hearing enough of that from family (at last your German isn´t the mean devil character - that would be too stereotypical)
some plot, something funny...something sexy :)
and that means I need more!
....bareback.com I was laughing my ass of.....my roommate even came in to ask what happened!
Muffin was a real bitch...the poor maid, but I´m sure she will survive :)
And just like Muffin I´m waiting for the end of the week :)
PS no jokes about Germans and Jews please! I´m living in Germany at the moment....I´m hearing enough of that from family (at last your German isn´t the mean devil character - that would be too stereotypical)
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March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
(13) After finally getting all caught up I still wasn't sure that I actually liked Asher but he is most definitely sexy and we are getting to see moments of caring, it's an interesting dynamic between these two. Part of me thinks Muffin should give in because he would just have so much more fun but at the same time I like that he's still fighting a bit, although it seems that has more to do with fear than anything. I can't blame him though because what would a ridiculously rich businessman want with a uneducated, loudmouth brat, I wonder if Asher has any longterm plans besides just getting in Muffin's pants. I can't imagine him taking Muffin to parties or business meetings (and really would Muffin actually want to go), it's definitely making me look forward to reading more about them :)