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Great story! I can't remember if I have already review this story or not, so I'll do it now. I love the plot or what we can see of it because we still don't know what happened in Muffin's past (just little bits that make us imagine so many things, he was in a car accident that involved water, right?) and who is Asher... or more exactly what does he really do for a living. I wonder who wants to kill him and why. I'm also dying to read about Muffin and Asher relation progressing in something more, their are getting better at interacting with each other but at the same time their personalities are so different that it's so funny they can bother each other so much. I like Anna, Zack and Alrick XD And I could tell you many more things but I have to do my homework. Do you know that this story made me eat three apple and cinnamon muffins? Hope you update soon :)

Can't believe i didn't read this earlier! Love it ^_^

Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com

Hello Mahsa! ^____^

Y'know.... everything began rather normally... Or as normal as things every got when reading your story... but well. the 'asher coercing muffin to drink water' and 'muffin's whole phobia thing' (whoots! finally, i hope asher's getting a few good hints as to what muffin's so scared about now!), anyway, all that is like... okay... i can stomach it...

Then ASHER PICKETT goes and SO NICELY asks another old-man-street-bum TO DINNER.... yes i froze for a few hundred moments there , as i kept on reading...
I dunno mahsa... something like MAJOR SHOCK here. O_O not say that it's a totally impossible thing to happen, just shock taht you took this turn in your story (*patpat* dont' worry, its not one of those "WHATTHEFUCKISTHIS" type of shock, its more of a "WOWNEVEREXPECTEDTHISTOHAPPEN" sort of shock ;) )

Makes me stop and think... that this mafia-ish asher actually has a heart of gold... no wonder his subordinates are so hell loyal to him.

but goodness! Gahahahah!!! XDDD
who? WHO? like for real? do posh people in posh restaurants ("the black sky" like gothic?) flip out their cell phones and take pictures??? it thought only high school girls did that!! XDD


and OH MY GOD!!!!
this chapter is one HUGE SHOCKER!!!
WHAT THE HECK IS GOING ON?!?!?!?

Asher? ASHER!!! *shakes the poor dude* are you like OKAY?????
First he goes and acts so totally human, then he goes and freaks out after the accident...

speaking of the accident...
LIKE WHATTT?!?!?!??! just who the hell did that? and . like... i dont... GAH!??!?!! what?! JUST WHAT ?!?!

but honestly! you've gotta give it to muffin to actually give the idea to drive the car into the lake... it's like forcing himself to re-live the nightmare... well, better a nightmare you are familiar with rather than a new one yea?


all in all the writing was okay, thou there were a few sentences that I had some problems understanding... (or maybe its just me) or maybe it's you *gaps* lol XD
you know how sometimes you get a plot hit or your muse suddenly pounces on you, and you feel like you just want to let your fingers fly and type everythign out. well, go ahead and let those finger's fly, but later come back and read what you typed to. sorta proof read or smthing ;)
.... ok i'll shut up now, who the hell am I advising you? *gets a brick thrown at her*
XDDDD

see ya in the next chapter! ;)

what's after ginger? garlic? XDDD

- nekoii

My My....the plot thickens. I'm starting to see a bit more of muffins prior life unfolding before my eyes. I keep thinking I'll get tired of this fic but it just won't happen. Oh well....gonna patiently wait for the next update.

Not sure about that ginger muffin......sounds like an odd flavor.

I havent had a chance to review, agaain, since I haven been able to login on my computer. But, I just wantd to let you know I love your story so much! I check every day for an update...but that makes me sound like a stalker, so....

Anyway! I can't wait for more! Asher and Muffin are great, but sometimes I feel so bad for Muffin, b/c Asher seems to just be toying with him
:(

ASDF! Muffin is so adorable! FDSDAUYEA! I can't believe how much I love your story :D
I don't know if it wa sasked or answered but, is your sory going to be long? I hope so, I love it, and would be tres tres triste if it was short :D Anyways!

Your story reminds me of the muffin video on Youtube...Have you ever seen it? If you ever run out of Muffin names you should look it up if you havent :D

Until your next update,
Jadesy
I am not sure if it was ever addressed, and not to sound snotty but I don't have time to do a quick run through the authours notes..but do you accept fan art work?

OMG! I FUCKING LOVE THIS STORY! IT'S LIKE A TV SHOW OR A MOVIE!
YOU SHOULD TURN THIS INTO A SHOW OR SOMETHING!!

“No. Now I own you,” was all he said.

I would be pisst ass hell too man.
Hahaha! I love this story!

*pouts* I wish my lip was delicious looking like Muffin's...

Wow - nice chapter. Nice action and plot development, indeed. Ginger is great as they gingerly made their way back and gingerly dealt with the situation. Thanks!

Man.... this story is so freaking tight man....