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YEAH! We finally got some action between Asher and Muffin. And I can't believe Zack walked in on them! And then they knew what happened! But then how old is Muffin, he should still be pretty young right? But that makes me wonder if he was so young then why didn't Zack and Anna protest Asher having sex with Muffin? Arg, so many questions! ^_^ Great chapter, I can't wait for the next one!

That was hot! really hot.....I want more!!!
lesson three was great for Muffin and me as a reader :)

I took Goliath down with a lick. - that´s brilliant, great and funny.....

okay maybe my review today isn´t very constructive, but I´m ill, lying in bed with a fever and your new chapter made my day....and the only thing I wish for is another chapter....

short: I love this story!!!

PS I´m on medicating....I´m not responsible for my writing....or the big euphoria because Muffin finally lost his virginity ;)
PSS That´s really a new level in their relationship....and I hope it will continue this way.... :)

Laugh. I really liked this chapter. It was a little short though (I'm kidding, kidding.) So Zack and Anna knows now. Poor Muffin. Nothing goes the way he planned it to. Not that he had that many fantastic future plans going on in that head of his. But he sure can pick his poison, now can't he. Of all the soft nice people to end up with, he ended up with the fluffiest one of all. Or maybe not. I miss Mario. Where is Mario. I liked Mario. Was his name Mario? He was a fun guy, that Mario. Can't Muffin get to harass him some more? Nudge, nudge.

Okay, i admit i passed over this fic a couple of times and i was a fool for doing so...the title had me thinking it was one of those sub standard stories we see every once in a while.i have never been so glad to be mistaken, this is fabulous!love the characters, the storyline, the lack of angsty moaning and groaning over sexuality,th suspense is killing me and am lovin it:-)

I really appreciate how you interweave lust/sexuality/exploration/inexperience. Too many flicks make virginity into this big thing etc. You made it meaningful yet realistic!

You know what, i'm having this ridiculous scenes in my head: Asher is a hero, and he is fighting against an evil party, eh government party and he disguises as an fucking a-asshole =)) LOL dont know what possess me but i really have that in my stupid head. Anyway, this event bring out the spot and danger for our characters and my curiosity. I want to know about Muffin more, his past, why he's so scare of water and why he became a homeless. Tell me *or I'll stalk you thou I dont know where you live xP*
And glad that you like the drawing ^^ I'll try and play with Asher next, hm

aww,new chapter...almost a week late XD...somehow I felt that this is a 'warm' chapter, with Muffin less feisty and Asher being relatively human..so,is Muffin finally succumbed to Asher's charm?with the peck and subdued rebellion..also, when will Vincenzo make his comeback? I miss MuffinxVin's banter..
on other note, I'm happy that you like the comic, considering that there are rough-sketch like panels (esp the last 2 pages),Muffin's range-less expressions (confused and bewildered XD) and snail like updates ^___^'a
so,please, don't check for updates everyday, just every end of the week..XDD

Don't apologise for the plot, come on, it's the BEST this story can offer. I don't want this to turn into mindless porn with nothing else at least :/

Their relationship.. I seem to be interested in their growing feelings for eacher a lot more too (not just the porn I mean). Really enjoy this. I'm really curious about Asher's past and thoughts and well.. life in general. I just want to see inside him and also find out what's with all the (seemingly) illegal action going on. That's really fascinating. But Muffin's immaturity is starting to annoy me a bit too much, I realize he's had a hard life but I don't think it justifies the ways he treats at least some people. Like Jenny. Really hope he matures, at least a little bit.

by the way, I forgot to tell you!! in the pumpkin muffin you said the librarian found the wallet in the pocket of the jacket (oh my, i make it rhymes! XD), but this only can happen if she registered muffin, and for that she had to (unless she was going to steal him, like some bad people on the streets...) pick him up and bring him to a warm place like the library, where she could help him with more calm!

i would not bother you unless you wrote in the banana (or ginger?) muffin that there was a photo where Asher was picking up muffing under the poury rain. So i want to explain that? how bad was the librarian to just pickpocket muffin and let him get wet all hurt in the street? or was it my bad english? or my weird way to read? i dunno, im confused, maman...

so, waiting for more muffins!! bye

*cries* I got sick and missed two updates! awww... Going off to read now.