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where are you? need an update!

what an awesome plot! i'm so happy to finally read a story that's not just about smut, or pointless, half-hearted 2-D drama. this stuff is great and i actually can hardly wait until the next chapter! it's so detailed, yet mysterious at the same time. i'm just dying to find out more about both main characters' histories. keep up the great work.

I don't think the previous post were posted...just..in case...ok, here we go again..
seriously, you need your e-mail add posted on your profile..XD...just to tell you that the next and the rest submission for the fan-comic will be on http://yaoi.y-gallery.net/gallery/nutnut/muffin/
the last update (pg11) finally break Photobucket's term, apparently they do not allow sexual images, could've fooled me since my last upload which definately explicit went unscratched..so yeah...

cheers

I've just finished reading all 15 chapters. What an awesome story. It's hard to believe someone can exist like Muffin does. Or like Asher does. It's genius to bring those two together. It's perfect therapy for Muffin too; after surviving so many attempted murders his earliest brush with death will not seem so important, lol. Please update soon, I'm addicted. Oh speaking of which I don't like Asher tempting Muffin with morphine. How can he take caffeine away and put that out there?

nice pun :). can't wait for more. asher is so smug. ahh! why doesn't he admit he wants muffin?!?

Mahsa!!! awww man, why don't you have an e-mail link on your profile?
I wanted to send ya this..... FANART!!!! XD *gets a brick thrown at her*
sorry, my art is not all that great. so... >_< if you hate it, dont kill me!!!!

here http://i265.photobucket.com/albums/ii202/nekoii_hiwatari/muffinnekoii.jpg

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- nekoii

Haha I'm loving it. Write a review one day and 'voolah!' get a new chapter the next. Its almost like having a a magic genie lamp.

Haha pun much? Loved the cherry muffin. I'm going to go out and hunt for a cherry muffin; if they don't exist I'm going to buy a muffin and buy a cherry -> then tada a "cherry muffin". Seriously by the time I got your amazing pun I had this big dorky grin on my face. It really was quite good. You really must have a genius level of humour(if such an IQ test existed). So WOOOOHEEEE!!!! Asher and Muffin already at home base/fast tracked to lesson 3. It was such a delicious interaction between the two leading up to this; but it just means more action now right? It was an absolute delight watching the power dynamics flipping from one party to another during the foreplay... Asher was so so naughty; well clever actually. He must have the charm of the devil to be able to get away with smexing Muffin in Zack and Anna's own house. Muffin was so so cute. Really have to love that kid. You say that it wasn't romantic; yes it was somewhat awkward but in a way profoundly sweet and the fact that you were able to stay true to both their characters throughout the scene was really great. I mean it could of all become a messy mess or a cliched romantic mess but you made it into a an awkward delicious true-to character mess. Trust me it was really good.

"Asher was as aware of my unpredictability as I was" haha love that line. Some predictability in unpredictability huh? and this line "I took Goliath down with a lick." heh not much to say there. And this paragraph "I ignored his warning, reverting back my focus solely on the attention his mouth showered on me. My dreams were already dust in the wind, disappearing through the window Asher threw open when he climbed in. If he touched me in one spot, my attention fixed immediately in that area, if he made a sound, I listened; my frequently wandering mind never went far this time. I thought nothing of it when his hand dipped into the loose hold of my pants, past my boxers, straight to my penis."

Can't wait to see how or what events will lead stubborn/proud Mr. Muffin to run back into the arms of Mr. Pickett. I fell on my sword; I even got up and ran myself through a couple extra times just to make sure so that means you owe me more than a couple more extra scenes where Muffin gets to use his new tricks on Asher. And well I think his got a real ace up his sleeve now. That was a very satisfying chapter; I feel like I've eaten a very scrumptious deliciously hot muffin...

OK, so seriously I am trying my hardest to finish reading this, but people keep stealing my laptop! Or shutting off the internet, or tickling me, or just turning the computer off. Very aggravating. I'm pretty sure they are only doing it because they think its funny to here me scream NOOOO MUFFIN!!! It confuses the dorm mates and we get weird looks and i giggle but still! anyway obviously this is a good story cuz i am going through all this hell just to finish reading it. awesome. and heck i haven't even made it to the last chapter and I'm already reviewing, cools!.

Ok so I've been reading and finally caught up with it all...and damn do I love this story! There has to be more and soon...there are so many unanswered questions. Who the hell is Muffin? What's his story? Will Asher ever open up? Will we ever learn why Asher chose Muffin? PLEASE MORE SOON! I'm desperate!
CJ

I REALLY LOVE THIS STORY. MUFFIN IS SO ADORABE, AND ASHER IS JUST WHAT MUFFIN NEED. I LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE THE STORY FROM MUFFIN'S POV. I AM HOPING THAT YOU WILL WRITE A CHAPTER OR TWO FROM ASHER POV SO THAT WE CAN HAVE AN IDEA OF HIS PERSONAL THOUGHTS ABOUT MUFFIN :)