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I love how sentimental and loyal Muffin is... and how he has it in his mind to actually go do manual labor help A&Z. He probably knows he can't help them keep the restaurant, but it's touching how he tries in his own way.

YAY update!!! Thank you so much. I have been 'patiently' waiting...I absolutely love the development between Asher and Muffin. It is so cute how Muffin is still very hesitant. I really like how Asher seems to be very patient with Muffin...all things considered that is. Anyway, please keep up the great work. I am definitely looking forward to the next update.

well.....I don´t know but after the cherry chapter :) .....this chapter was very slow after all that action.....and in my opinion Muffin didn´t give in.....Asher came after him...so Muffin wins :)
sorry do say but you didn´t satisfy my needs.....I already need a new chapter! (oh my god, I´m a junkie....)
See you!

PS What excuses? How could you? updates are important for the mental health of your readers!

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hahaha glad u like it lol it was rather inspired and has become a bit of a standing joke with my friends (cuz i love cupcakes)!!
Im soo adicted to ur story that i caught this update pretty fast - i even came back to read it again! AW i completely loved the chapter - fantastically written and the suspense kept me hanging on!! tho i cannot believe how long Muffin held out - he really is stubborn!!
OH Yeah the wire taps n bugs!! That was just inspired lol i mean imagine the cops faces and reactions wen they heard what was going on the night before HA! i even went back n read just the dialogue form that chapter just to laugh!!
Ohhh n Mario's back - "Goomba?!" loved it!! hope he sticks around cuz i reckon he cud do som MAJOR teasing/innuendo with Asher and Muffin!
The information trade and Muffin's requirement to be polite is gonna create some exciting situations (esp. wen Muffin looses his temper - which he will)... even more so if Mario (*cough* and his sarcasm *cough*) stick around!!
Are the other two ppl Alrick and Michael? cuz that wud make an interesting mix!!
whew wen did this review get so long?!
Neway - brill update and i cant wait to see how this 'business trip' goes!!

Yes the chapters are all read and I have been checking for updates every morning before classes, when suddenly there was an update! It was like Murphy finally decided to love me, Angels sang, and I screamed. Waking my roommate up. She was pissed and I was ecstatic. All I could do was jump up and down chanting "Muffin! Muffin! Muffin!" Then I just happened to glance at the time. "OMG OMG OMG class!" So then I had to go all day thinking about the Muffin and how I would get to read the Muffin, the Muffin was on my computer in my room. All answers I gave all day long, was Muffin. Feel honored, it's usually Zim.

Anyway my review for the day....

HOLY FREAKING CRAP IT'S MUFFIN!!!!

...I Loves Muffin...

Have A Nice Day.

YES! Finally! I thought you had died or something^_- Good to have you back, and I can't wait till the next update! I want more Muffin and Asher action!

He had just a few weeks of a normal life and then it all came crashing down. Strange, but I don't know if I should cheer Muffin on or beat him in the head with a stick! He has so much pride.
It would be nice if the word "no" actually meant something to Asher. Muffin says "no" all the time to him and it just goes in one ear and out the next.
These characters are so complex, I love them! Yay! to another great chapter.

It's probably my fault for getting so addicted to your story but when will you update????????????
It's been more than two weeks already. :(
I really hope nothing bad happened to you...

Wow! I completely love your story!! I read it completely in like 3days - it's sooo addictive!! I really enjoy the dynamics between Asher (who i LOVE!) and Muffin (so cute!): their relationship of Asher's controlling attitude and Muffin's defiance always keep the chapters lively and entertaining. I notice that while Asher has got Muffin to say please, thank you etc Muffin has never called him by his name! hahah Muffin's smart mouth and his sarcastic wit (especially with vincenzo - will he be back?) along with the police, reporters and Asher's 'challenge' make it interesting to see how he will deal with everything!!!!!! Can't wait to find out what happens next!!!!!!!

Hey. Just wanted to drop in and say that I absolutely LOVE this story, especially Asher & Muffin! ;) One of my favorite original fics on AFF. I'm dying for another chapter soon to see what happens next.