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ah.

I feel like an idiot now.... *sulks*

Vincenzo... sorry dude, i forgot you after you were rotting away at the hospital... feeling better now, mario?

BUT THAT DOESNT EXPLAIN THE GOOMBA!!!
I'm dense, so help me. *fails* ;____; (`A` )

*grins very widely* AHHH... I love, LOVE LOOOOVE Asher... oh, Muffin too, naturally, especially for trying to save the diner! THat was so touching! Loved this chaper, and was serioslyy scared a few times, absolutely CERTAIN muffin would get abducted or something else terrible would happen... and thet cliffie?! Now I'm so curious I can't sit still.. so I'm gonna sit here, jumping on my chair, until the next update! No rush or anything... ;o)

Yay, Mario is back! It'll be fun to see Muffin rile him up again. Thanks for the update and looking forward to the next chapter!

OMG!! Mario is back =D..I'm just glad Asher's staying of course 8D

Omg, Mario returns!! I'm so glad, I have to admit, I freaking LOVE Mario (and would use his real name if I weren't sure I would misspell it). Thank you so much for updating, I was pining for some Muffin. But... pineapple? Lol, unique. I'm also glad to hear that Asher does in fact have a sweet side. I would write more, but my brain is at its breaking point, so just know that this is pretty much my favorite story of all time, and I will forever be one of your devoted readers. Now, to bed.

~MM<3

real nice love the suspense

OMG I've missed this story SO much! I'm so excited! I... I... I forgot to actually read the chapter... oO I'll... go do that now... ;o)

[In response to your response: haha....awww thanks! :-) I always leave fangirly squeeish reviews for authors I really like. I figure if I'm enjoying someone's hard work that their not even getting paid for, the least I can do is let the author know how much this reader appreciates that they are still putting their talent out there. Also, I diddn't mean I thought you should do the next chappie from Ash's POV (sorry if i wasn't clear) I actually think that doing a chap from Ash's POV now would be too disruptive to the flow of the story at this point, we are so used to seeing things from Muff's POV now. But when you have finished this story, I think it would be great if you wrote some "extras" to it, like maybe scenes that Muff wasn't involved in, (for example, the times when Ash was talking to Zack and Anna, or other scenes from Ash's POV that readers already have from Muffs Pov. ( cough, the sex scene would be great, cough) Or, dare I say, on a more ambitious level, when you have finished this story, would you consider re-writing the entire thing from Ash's POV? XD heehee I know thats alot though, but I bet it would thrill alot of your fans! XD
Now as to this Pineapple chappie....love it!! Each succeeding chapter is just as good as the previous one, and that consistency is really impressive. By the way are you on YGAL? I'll def friend you there if you are. My goodness I diddn't mean for this to be such a long winded post, lol

Gah, i'm being a dork and leaving another review because I forgot to say that I just LOVE the bits you put in abut the morphine....I think it gives Ash and Muff's relationship a bit of a dark tinge that makes it even more interesting. Just had to get that off my chest :-)

Damn computer crashes and I come back to find you have to chapters updated.
That makes me a happy person. :]

Glad to see they finally had a move forward in their relationship.
Poor Muffin, he puts up with so much shit and still tries his hardest.

Goombas. XD

Can't wait till next chapter.