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aww... sad to hear you'll be away for two weeks. I'm really happy that you uploaded though. You seem to upload rather speedily in comparison to the other stories I read. I really liked this chapter. I saw the desk humping happening the second Muffin walked into the room. XD

I don't know...I must admit I like the fact that Muffin can make Asher lose his cool. There is something very endearing about it. Anyways, the two or three weeks I have to bear without this story will be hell but hopefully I'll survive.

OMG, I missed 2 updates T.T I'm so busy lately that reminded me why I hate life sometimes *cry*

Wow, really didnt expect this, both the sex and Ashers leaving O.o But who am i kidding, i love it ^^

And when he tried to help Anna? It's so touching how much he care about them, wonder when he'll care about Asher like that ;))
when I read that they'll both share their lives, i feel so giddy, we're going to know something, we're going to know something ^0^
you make me want more =3

Me so happy that Mario's back *grin, muahahaha* missed you Vicenzo and what the hell? Goomba?

Oh my, I think I'm going to read this story again

Took me forever to get to read this chapter since I was out of town BUT!!! holy cow it was good.

Love how Muffin didn't just give in and tried his best to make it work on his own. I'm gonna have to go back and figure out who Mario is though....curse my short memory!!

The biggest plus to having to wait to read it is less wait time for the next chapter WOO!!!

*squee update!!! *double squee MARIO!! aaahh how I miss him...love,love the chapter and how Asher is a manipulative bastard, but poor Muffin, once again he was played right into Asher's clutch, I really never suspected the development =P..It's good that Muffin came out with his pride intact..aaand...*sheepish I've been reaaalllyy slow (more like came into a complete halt) with the comic, gomen, I'll revive it nxt week...awe, don't feel bad bout the photobucket, I had great time drawing the near-smut, and really, I had great time drawing those muffin fanarts :)

double posting/reviewing...XD
=)) have just googled 'goomba'...wakakakakakakakka, a nice fit for Muffin...hahahah, sucha an adorable angry looking mushroom, heh, never have guessed that Vin has some sense of humor...
ps. who should I bribe/bully/threat for the bug's record tape? hmm? XD

i have a crush on muffin.

at first i thought this would be an april fools update, but whew it wasn't!

i like how asher is more addicted to muffin than muffin is to his morphine pills. the attraction is cute. perverted and strange, yet cute all the same.
great update! i enjoyed reading this chapter.

oh no way, I know I'd never be angry about lots of plot... It makes the smut so much sweeter! I personally loved this chapter because there was no smut in it. Although we'd love for it to happen, muffin wouldn't turn into a sex fiend over night LOL. I'm glad that you gave Asher and Muffin time apart, distance makes the heart grow fonder ;) yay for bringing back vincenzo! More witty banter! Oh and...I hope he sucks too ^_^ I can't wait to see what's next!!!

AH! OH GOD!!! MY SIDE HURTS!!! OWUCH!!! damnit you GAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAH XDDDDD Freaking hell hell... Stupid one sentence made me laugh this much?!? Ouch!
what the HEEELLL was with the "Great, we were going to play a I’ll show you mine if you show me yours game." The only such game I can recall of that is during childhood days whereby kids compare their scabs or scars, and if put into the aff.net concept that you'd get kids (people?) showing more intimates part of their physical body.... uh but well, seeing as muffin and asher know each others body parts quite well (albeit through touch and feel better than sight), then the "showing" can be taken as one of their past and present and such.... but...
GAHHAHAHHAHAHAHA!!!! That line still cracked me up!!! *wipes tears* heheheheheh thanks man....


and “Goomba?” and "Mario?"
if my english serves me right. the person who said "Goomba" is one of the unknown three people. and ofcause Muffin was the one who said "MArio" , which means it was mario who spoke the word "Goomba". Now. we know that Goomba doesnt really sound like a language verb or advective or noun or whatever... so it has gotta be a SUBJECT... it was a NAME... was it not? and who the hell's name was it huh?!?!?!??!
Is muffin's REAL name GOOMBA?! ........
............. o _ O ..................
no offense, but a name like goomba makes me think it belongs to an ompalompa (those willy wonka factory workers). what kind of country or race breeds children with names like Goomba? and Mario? ok mario is ok but still weird for a real person instead of a video game character....

but.... but.... ah-- eh00--- uhk--- gah!

GAAAAAAAAAAAHHH you had went an CLIFFHANGER us on this freaking NAME business.... its like...
now everybody is going...

WHO IS GOOMBA?!?!?!?! its like "BOOM"gaaaaaaaa *gapes like an idiot*

and all the smoking... just how old are these people? or are they like mafiaso cigar smokey people the sort... and MUFFIN!!!! What about WORK!? did he just convineintly forgot that he was actually suposed to GO BACK TO WORK AFTER MAKING THAT DELIVERY?! but.... ah well, small petty things such as work didnt matter when one just nailed a job with pickett industries yea? *shrugs*

Just when I thought I was feeling a tad bit bored with the pace the chapter began with I changed my mind. Thanks Mahsa, you never fail to twist and zest the attention and expectation of your readers ;)

Now we have a whole new turn in the road, its like it looked like things all ended, but now its picking back up again. Your story's whole plot probably looks like a mountain range eh? xD (get it?)

All the best huneh!
anyway, Pineapple muffin?! o_O talk about exotic tropical fruits.
and when you think about it... pineapple, goomba, and mario somehow all seem to have the same taste of 'Where the hell did you come from' feel~

hehe X3

- nekoii~