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Ahhharrrghh! Oh em gee, no what a cliff hanger! These next few weeks are gonna be torture! No you didn't rush the sex, I think it was definetly necessary to show that muffin is becoming more and more attached to Asher...I felt his pain when he didn't get his cuddle...not that I don't get plenty of cuddling!..I just...ugh nevermind ha ha,TMI. Oh man... I gotta know if vincenzo smelled his hair!! Oh the foreshadowing is killing meeee! I think I may like this road you are headed down..I mean if my thought are on par hee hee!

I did a mary sue litmus test for Muffin and I got a 1- good job! :D http://www.onlyfiction.net/results.php

Great chapter!!! I really like Muffin and Asher... there are so many questions unanswered... It's not really clear what happened to Muffin after he was in the accident with his family or what happened with Jason because I'm sure he wasn' t just rude to him because Muffin would be equally rude or even more rude than him. Why is Muffin in danger? I'm sure that Asher likes him and cares for him more than he imagined possible at the beginning, right? Their relation is so strange and complex because they never actually tell each other things XD I'm glad that Mario/Vicenzo is back, even if I like Alrick better, he is funny when he gets angry.,, but now that I remember... did he really smell Muffin's hair? It's all his anger unresolved sexual tension?! Hope things go well with school :)

He smelt his hair. Just once I want the phantom to win, but maybe not this time. Slash isn't for experimenting.

I KNOW I said I love Asher, and I still do, but now I feel the need to kick his ass again! He should know Muffin is too insecure to just leave like that! Idiot! And Mario better stay away or he'll lose a lot more than he already has... *flexes claws*
Damn, I will miss this story SOOOO much during the break! I would be really happy for shorter chapters, but I maybe that wouldn't work with the story, so I'll just be patient... I would rather read a well written than a rushed story, anyway! I'm just gonna sit here, hug my pillow and wait... and, because of your friend and "Monsoon" I will sob into it too, so please give her a slap on the head from me... not a HARD slap, mind you, just hard enough.... ;o)

Great chapter. Very hot. You can sleep peacefully through the nights. For a while... Asher isn't the cuddly type now is he? But he sure did munch away on his muffin. Laugh. Yes, yes, it's a bad joke, but it entertains me ^-^=

NEW READER TO THIS FICTION!! I just wanted to say that I have read almost all of the chapters that you have posted. I gave myself a headache I read so much....but I love this story so much. Your writing is wonderful and the names of the characters are original. Muffin's attitude is just...well...I love it, he's so cocky and sarcastic....reaches over and hugs Muffin *squeeze* I can't wait to read more of this story!

Yay! Another Muffin chapter! I wonder how many muffins exist, and what are you gonna do when you run out of muffin names? I love the sex, it was great so don't worry. I am curious as to how Muffin and Mario are going to handle living together. Its also kinda wierd that Mario seemed to have smelt Muffin's hair. -_@ Oh well, I hope you finish your projects and write another yummy muffin chapter for us! :)

...Yall get together and decide to be busy all at one time I swears. *sigh* 5th story that school and projects have put the amazingness that are stories on hold. *tears* ANYWAY! I is excited about the Muffin updating, I've reread the last chapter so many times cause I just had to read the Muffin, and now, there is a new Muffin, so now I can need this chapter over and over and over for like...ever...0.0; OMG PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOON!!! Imma esplode witout da Muffin...That happens some times...

Oh yeah is Mario like going to molest Muffin or something? That freaked me out a smidge bit. Ok no seriously now I have an image of Mario humping a goomba...*shivers*

And seriously...how many kinds of muffins are there? 0.0 will there be a chapter for each kind? OMG I hope there are lots!!!

....Leaving now....