rate_review Reviews

Just finished chapter 6. I am so hooked on the story. Muffin is just so stubborn and always running off at the mouth.

The whole bath scene was so cute. It was so endearing picturing a sullen Muffin stripped naked and thrown in the tub and still pouting and struggling not to be washed. It made an interesting contract to imagine him being washed as a 5 year-old when in fact he's close to 20 (or at I hope, otherwise, Asher might do jail time for corrupting minors...ha-ha). And the whole mysterious, cool and aloof persona works so well for Asher.

I can't wait to read what happens next, especially after that tid bit about a stranger undressing in Asher's room. Love the story so far!

~ Trix

Holy shit, that was so beautiful. I'm just so amazed, your story is beautifully crafted. The plot is tight and everything was done intentionally and I loved (well, hated, but loved) Muffin's unreliable narration. I loved how you wove together everything into a betrayal and then not only explained how it wasn't but also explained how the bad guys would think that it was. I love love love how obsessed Ashton is and how your characters aren't morally superior pillars of perfection, but they do terrible things and great things and are multi-dimensional.

All in all, brilliant. I can't wait to read Matthew.

This is the third time I read this story, Oh man, this is so AMAZING!
the sequel is great too, even Better Than Muffin , but i love the ending of Muffin ,it is a fantastic ending
luv Vincenzo :)

Don't see what people were so confused about. Pretty much everything you've had to explain in reviews seemed obvious to me. Maybe they were new to fanfiction?

I gotta say, I feel so embarrassed for Muffin. His hormonal not realized but realized response must be so obvious to asher. I love how he just goes out there and says what he wants. def not a marry sue, he keeps surprising me with his human ness. with how much like me he is, in some aspects lol. I love the way you had him disgusted by his own filth, but possessive of it.

He really doesn't like to give up control, yet he keeps pushing for control to be taken from him, which is weird.

*titters* oh my

Nothing that happened was physically impossible. so confused. a person can tighten both ass and vagina muscles, if they have a vagina. A person can get in a few more inches by changing the angle.

Okay, what the hell is going on? NOW i'm confused lol. Are we coming to some revelations?

A-Asher is evil? Not bdsm noncon story evil, but EVIL evil? ;-; wut? WUT? but your whole plot... obviously that guys biased though, right?

*Breathes* good thing the next chapter is up. a cliffhanger like "it's asher's fault" would drive me nuts otherwise.

oh god no, not one of those people that reviews in chapters. gawd, why.



fuckin' hell, I love this character. a realistic character. "I knew what I had to do..................... run"

I believe this is the second or third time I've read this story, and it's still as good as the first time I did. :)

You're writing style is so in depth and your characters are real. :)