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We miss you!!!

I just spent 30 minutes trying to unearth this story since it's gotten buried. Would love to hear from youand can't wait to see the next installment.

I think I'm suffering from Muffin withdraw... :-(

I know I already reviewed for this chapter but I just re read it because I miss this story. I just wanna tell you that you are extremely talented and creative and this story is so well written! Please come back! I check to see if you've updated every day!!!

Has it been three weeks, has it, has it, has it??? ;-)
I really miss my weekly "Muffin-Fix". XD
Hopefully you can surprise us soon with a new chapter.

two to three weeks....well you have my blessing for this break ;)

not because I don´t want new chapters but I hope after this short stop you´re muse will be going crazy, waiting for the opportunity to show herself...so consequently more chapters faster than ever :)

the chapter : Yeah hot...and funny, I loved the scene with the invalid (don´t say...)....hahhaha great.....and faster than the least....but why plot who needs plot with these two? (I´m kidding I like plot....sometimes ;)

Asher is still so mysterious it's eating me alive! Almost more then having to wait several weeks for an update! :( It seems that with every encounter with Asher, Muffin is turning more humane. He actually felt bad for "Mario." But what is up with him touching Muffin so intimately?

holy crap. well, there are two options swimming in my mind, both of which are awesome:
1) Mario has a little wittle crush on muffin
2) Mario sees muffin as some long lost son of his and only wants to bond with the kid. or maybe muffin reminds him of a girl/guy he liked in the past.
OR he was making sure muffin had washed himself. heh. i could totally see that happening.

oh mario, you mysterious scar face you.

i can just imagine the embarrassment muffin could go through if mario comments on muffin's moaning.

and asher, stop teasing and show us your open side!!!!

anyway, the language in this chapter was AWESOME. (i.e. "The leather mask did little in actually covering the vine-like scars that disrupted the smoothness of his skin when he spoke. His chin stretched his face down while the mask remained in place; the resulting effect was rather dazzling, like seaweed disappearing into ocean waves. In, out, in out.".... WOW!!!!). And the way you depicted muffin/mario's exchange (or should i say, battle?) of hot-headedness was hilarious!!! great storytelling!!

ohhh no...you will be missed!

Review for muffin

"Oaky. Sweet." I thought you wanted to spell "Okay". hehehhe xD

but. anyway. this chapter was intense. in a way.
muffin's thought about his nightmares... is wow.
I really liked the paragraphs about red ridding hood, and the ones that followed. The way you phrased and place the sentences were really tasty.

you were right about the weird places...
coz now, it's in the office. (Not as weird as the living room floor of anna's house btw :P )
but...but... I was, ahem, kinda hoping they'd stay on the chair. *grins grins* so, you know, muffin could tease asher more. I can just imagine the hell he'd awaken should he be the one in control of the thrusts.
not that his antsy legs would be of any help LOL'ed~~~~ xD

Then ah! we come to the topic of MARIO!
Vincenzo... when I imagine the wreak he must look like. I can't help but cringe. Sigh. then shake my head.
What's to happen to him now? He's blind. and crippled. and has been degraded to the post of muffin's babysitter. he doesnt even get his own room damnit!
I'd give him pity, but he's sure to chew it, stomp on it, rip it to shreds then throw it back in my face.

and DAMN YOU ASHER for screwing muffin when poor mario is right there where he can hear everything, but get nothing... I mean, can you just imagine.
With that lousy attitude even BEFORE he was turned ugly looking, he was probably already having a hard time getting laid. And now you dump in ugly, cripple, and lousy attitude into the mixture. I'd say mario here's gonna be one frustrated man.

Which is not good... seeing as... he's showing signs of attraction to ashers favourite dessert?! (Oh gawds! someone prove me wrong!!!)
Somehow, muffin seems to be in so much more trouble than it looks.

speaking of muffin...
can we have more history please? *gives ya a puppy-eyed look*
More about muffin! Unravel his secrets and bare him open!!! WAHAAHHAHAHAHAH!!! xD

And asher! you! *smacks* you DO NOT just throw people onto tables like that! what if a pen or something poked into muffin, what if a letter opener stabbed him!? huh? a little nibbling at the ear and you go all BOOMWHACKSLAM! honestly, what are you? eri yuki? *head palm*

Then the post-it notes? I blinks at jhou. no not you mahsa *blinks at asher*
I don't know what to say. but. The character personality I have in my head about you is changing and changing with every chapter.

Surprise me Mahsa.
I know you will.
time and time again~


and ah! you'll be busy with school. damn you school. I, however, wont see you till next year! (school, i mean). but all the best to you, and those dreaded projects.
It's a good thing, in a way, since I have library books to finnish, and with my laptop's internet dead. Home PC is not a good place to read aff.net stuff, if you know what I mean.

cya next time =)

- nekoii~


ps: so what IS muffin's name?
Max? David? Jim? Peter? Tom? Dick? Harry?
hehe~ XD

Please please please let Vincenzo keep falling for Muffin!! I'm getting tired of Asher and his indifferent attitude. Maybe a little competition for Muffin's affection would get him to cherish Muffin a little more >=) Also, I kinda like the pairing of Muffin and Vincenzo. It's kinda like Beauty and the Beast...or maybe I just have a thing for guys with scars xP But anyway, please update as fast as you can. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!