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June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really...LOVE this story, I sat here for almost nine hours straight to read it all. I like how you really stuck with Muffin's character, I personally find it hard not to change the characters to make it easier to write the story, but you keep me on my toes. I would esily say Alrick is one of my favorite characters. Keep it up!
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June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What's this? Quality time with Vincenzo. I like it. Muffin and Vincenzo might be good for each other with their various mental issues. I would love for the two of them to spend more time together.
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June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Its definitely a good story so far, but please...please tell me this kids real name isnt Muffin. XD
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June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww, does Mario think Gomba have the right things in the right places, as in looking hot? Awwww...
But why the heck should Muffin run? Why why why..?
But why the heck should Muffin run? Why why why..?
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June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this, and at first I wasn't going to read it because I misuderstood the summary, ha ha ha. I'm glad I did. Asher isn't like a vigalante or something,right? There is never any infoon what he's actually doing on anything, even when or why he is involved in stuff, and it seems too obvious to be gang-related. Lastly, Asher's not just a dick right? I'd feel so bad if he was. UPDATE SOON!
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June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I know everyone has read this chapter (ch. 13) eons ago, but I had to comment: I was on the floor hysterical laughing when Muffin Googled gay brokeback sex. OMFG, I already guessed that Asher could see whatever Muffin was doing on his screen. OMG, I would have died from embarrasment also! And Asher teasing him like that; not nice! Great chapter. The best chapter so far!!!!
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June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ahh love the chapter but cant wait 4 a bit more of Ascher/Muffin bonding :P update soon!
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June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Mahsa, you're back!!! *cuddle*
I really mssed you. :3
I love the new chapter but did it have to be a cliffhanger...? *pouts*
Now you really have no other choice but to update quickly so that us
faithful readers can find out why there's a note from Alrick saying to "run".
I'm looking forward to your next chapters. Welcome back. XD
I really mssed you. :3
I love the new chapter but did it have to be a cliffhanger...? *pouts*
Now you really have no other choice but to update quickly so that us
faithful readers can find out why there's a note from Alrick saying to "run".
I'm looking forward to your next chapters. Welcome back. XD
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June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!!!!!! I practically fell off my stool reading this chapter (14). Your writing had me on the edge of my seat!!!! Poor Muffin; having to endure his nightmares all over again. OMG, the car going to fast and your descriptions, I was biting my nails the entire ride!!! What a GREAT chapter!!!! Thank God for Anna, right? And Asher has been calling her EVERY DAY!!!!! How great is that?! Yay Asher! Great job; I'm off to read more!
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June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
No.....how could you....these notes should be from Asher!!!
After everything he does to Muffin it´s time for him to be unsure, lovesick and and and .... I want him on his knees begging.... (I don´t know for what but he should :)
and what do you mean by more crazy? that´s possible? ;)
Like always: please update soon and you will make me happy and you know what they say! if you make somebody happy you will be happy ;)
After everything he does to Muffin it´s time for him to be unsure, lovesick and and and .... I want him on his knees begging.... (I don´t know for what but he should :)
and what do you mean by more crazy? that´s possible? ;)
Like always: please update soon and you will make me happy and you know what they say! if you make somebody happy you will be happy ;)