rate_review Reviews

Great chapter! And... you ended the chapter in a terribly cruel manner, especially after so many time without updates! I liked all the Vicenzo/Muffin interaction... they are so funny to read about. And Vicenzo is attracted to him, right? I can't wait to know more about Muffin's past... so many unexplained things (as well as more about Archer and everything XD) And now... about the ending... why did Archer wrote a note telling him to run? Why not tell him that? I'll be all anxious waiting to read the next chapter. Hope you can update soon! :)

i bet vinny dreamed of muffin. that's what made him scream XD.

awesome chapter! i'm glad to hear you're still continuing this story!!!

Chapter 18

Okay!!!

You've got me rooting for some hot Italian Stallion action!!! HA!

Wounded with nightmares, Vincenzo's got that whole sexy beast thing going.
Inky black strands of hair falling into his face, scars disappearing into
a leather mask, probably has great abs, chest, a strong back, and muscular thighs,
all with a light dusting of black hair and covered in manly perspiration!!! HA!!!!!


A few more torso shots of Mario, some more subtle touching, maybe another
shirtless moment or two and your public will demand that he be given his own boy!!!
I'll be leading the chant!!!! Mario action!!!! MARIO ACTION NOW!!!!

(Okay, that's out of my system!!)

So many mysteries makes this story too, too enjoyable!!!
Love the way you get Muffin caught up into every strange goings on
without ever really telling us what the heck is happening and
later, I realize I really didn't need to know exactly what was happening
because I enjoyed Muffin's POV too, too much!

Gotta RUN!
Thanks,
R


ps Chapter 17 small error-> emphasized/empathized

“Let me guess, you want some greasy pasta?” I grinned teasingly.

“Shut the fuck up.”

I shrugged at his hostility, finding it easier to ignore when I understood it. Well, not exactly understood, more like emphasized (empathized) with.

“Is there a phone here?” I asked.

“No, and no, you can’t use my cell phone. Call your pimp another time.”

M!

Yup! Still here pondering a sequel staring Mario, the title of which, would of course be, "Sausage."
Just giving myself a giggle!

Thanks,
R!

........HOLY MOTHER OF CHEETOS ITS ABOUT TIME!!!!

I've missed you Muffin...I've missed you!!!!! Oh and you too Mahsa ^_^

I'm soooooo happy that you've come back to this! It's one of my favorite stories out there right now (and I have pretty picky tastes =P). I've been checking up on this fic every day since you've been gone except for this past week when I've been away from a computer. This last chapter gave me chills! I had to immediately go and tell a bunch of my friends to start reading it (I don't know why that thought didn't cross my mind sooner)! 'Muffin' is real genius and I'm overjoyed that you're back! I hope you studies went well and I REALLY hope you update soon- you just can't leave us with that kinda cliff hanger for long! :D

What the hell is going on here? This story is getting crazy. I don't know if I like it. What is up with the notes? Aghh! I like Asher and Muffin. I don't know what your plans are, but I don't want to see Muffin and Asher split up. I mean, Muffin can keep playing hard to get and Asher can keep up his too cool act, but they can't really split up. What's up with Muffin and Mario? That chapter was wack!

I just found this story and I have to tell you that I am soooo into it. I couldn't stop reading it. I read all of your updates in a day and all I kept thinking after each chapter was, what will happen next. I love this story about Muffin...everything about it is so good...and thank you for the long chapters, i love reading them. Now I wondered why alrick wants muffin to run, and who is he suppose to run from? this is really good and i can't wait for your next update. thanks for sharing this story. you rock!

WHAT THE....! Oh you are so cruel! That cliffie was absolutely torture! Why does he have to run? Is Vincient gonna do something bad? WHATS GOING ON!!!!!! Man, you just have to update again soon, please, I'm too worked up now. OH, and welcome back, its been awhile! ^_^ I'm glad you didn't abandon this story, its just way too good. Update again soon please, I'll be waiting!

I love this story!!! Keep it up.