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Muffin is a great character. I love the fact that he has flaws and that he is not the classical emo bottom boy. His relationship with "Mario" is very interesting. They seem to be attracted to each other and deep down they seem to be cut from the same cloth. I actually wouldn't mind to see something developing with him. Asher is indeed kind of bipolar: sometimes he seems very cool and detached (mob boss kind of personality) and other times he almost opens up (mostly when he's fascinated by Muffin). I curious about how Asher and "Mario" interact. Is the latter a loyal henchman or do they have a more friendly relationship? For a second, in the very beginning, I had a guess that they could be casual fuck buddies from time to time and that is why Muffin was so badly received by "Mario" :P

I would like to read next chapter. so please update soon. thank you
Muffin is a wonderful story.

Cat, here, from the Looking at the Stars Awards (www.latsawards.webs.com), just letting you know that your story, Muffin, has been nominated in the first round for Quirkiest Story Title. I’ll be notifying you again if your story makes it to the next, and final, round. If you’d like your story to be removed from consideration, please reply as soon as possible.

Congratulations and good luck!

Hi. *Waves*

God, it’s been forever. Due to unforeseen monetary problems I had to let my internet get shut off. But I’m back! (^_^) Just wanted to let you know that I’m still a deeply devoted fan and am following the story…speaking of which:

Oh Porto. Why? Why did the poor dog have to die? That’s just mean. (Don’t worry though, I’ll get over it. I just need to vent a little. Poor doggy.)

I’ve been gone so long then I get a chance to catch up on the story and you leave it at one of the greatest cliffhangers I have ever read.

"Run"

I’m dying to know what in the heck is going on. Does Aleck know or think that Muffin’s in danger? Is he in danger? Does it have to do with Asher (what am I saying, of course it does)? What’s the subtle but strange stuff that’s going on between Muffin and Vincenzo?

I have all these questions you’re driving me crazy. Anyway, the story is still one of my favorites and I hope you find the time to update it.

O - M - G I love the name MuffinXD hahahaha it sounds so cute..
But I really really want to know what his real name is and what his age is and WHY he hates water so much, I want to know everything about our little Muffin O.O *squeels*
and....Asher...*sighs* I soo love him, at first I had to get used to his name but later it sounded more and more hot, I love him and his attitude and I LOOOOOoOOVE when he loses his cool in bed *nosebleed*
It really is frustrating that this is written in Muffins POV but I love the way its written, I love how you can't UNDERSTAND or KNOW how Asher feels, or if he really has feelings for Muffin, I love his cool stoic attitude and I really hope it stays that way *sighs contently*
ahahahha and Mario is soo funny, I like him really much and I hope that nothing will happen to him and Alrick
But what I don't get is...why did he write 'run'???? *talking about Alrick*
dang it..did you have to stop there? *depressed*
and I'm so glad that Muffin didn't go to Asher on his own! soo technically Asher came towards Muffin :3 and not Muffin to him!! hurray for the strong uke *sways happily*
dammit I want to know about Ashers history
and fuck Michael that basterd! how could he beat him!!! grr! *growls frustrated* I hope he gets killed, but I can't help but to think that he will come back in Muffins life again *shivers*
AND PORTOO waaah why whyy1!!! I loved Porto! he was cute T.T why did you kill him !! T_T nyaaaaaawwhh

Anyways now some compliments about your writing style, I like how you describe the feelings of Muffin, I love it ...I love everytime he feels depressed or when he is shocked...you really can describe things soo...*sighs*
I love your characters and how you describe them and how they act.
I love this storyXD and *looks at how much 'I loves' she wrote* O.O
...you got me hookedXD

oops sorry for the long reviewXD and thank you for posting this amazing story!
But please update soon!!! :3 <3333

where are you?

HEY!! When are you going to put in a new chapter. It has been a long long time since you last put in one. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE put in a new chapter, I'm dieing here!!!

Ok, so I read the whole thing in one day, so I’m afraid my review won’t be very specific, sorry! I absolutely loved your story though. Oh my gosh, when his dog died I cried—partially because he had just lost his only buddy and partially because I STILL didn’t know what his real name was (or if that story that he told Mr P was true). …. Is his name really really Muffin? I’m so confused…nothing’s changed there. Y-Y

Oh, and then in the conference meeting, I kid you not, I had to leave my laptop and go clean the apartment to try to escape the embarrassment I felt for him. AH! I would’ve died a million deaths! *wants to hide again just thinking about it* I can’t imagine being on any side of that situation. I mean, what the board members be thinking? Ah! *runs in circles as her face turns bright red* Death. Death. Death. No emo kid would have anything over me at that point. *dies* At the same time, I gotta admit, as a bio-major I thought that the “Consider this field work” line was incredibly sexy. I mean DAMN. Shame such an amazing line came after such an embarrassing moment….

Oh! And I’m so glad that “Mario”’s back again! I missed their bickering like you can’t believe! Haha, and I still laugh at that stupid Jahava’s Witnesses joke every time I think about them, lol.

But, I dunno, I could never be with a guy like Asher. His type just promotes too many insecurities, you know? Ugh. I love this story to pieces, but I feel so bad for Muffin, like he deserves someone who really loves him and is willing to show him that he’s needed. He’s always one step behind Asher, never really connected with him. I need to go read some WAFF fic now, you know?

OMG ALRICK!!??! *dies* must…know…..*desperately reaches for next chapter*




Anywho, just wanted to let you know that your story rocked and that I’ve added it to my recommended reading section :)


May the muse be with you!
You're new, ever-loyal fan,
Miranda

Curse you! I'm becoming more attached to Muffin/Vincenzo than Muffin/Asher. Unless that's what you want, in that case--you have succeeded. I just wish Asher wasn't THAT much of a sarcastic prick. Maybe you should get Muffin to kick him in the nuts, figuratively or literally--I'm flexible. Please hurry with the next chapter!

Please update.

Honestly, I swear you´ve gotten me addicted to this story... I check your account every day to see if there´s a new chapter and the disappointment never gets less when I see there is none. ;_; I only recently discovered this little gem and I´ve already reread it... *twice*! Which does *not* happen very often, I can tell you that!

The characters, the story, the way you tell the story, it all comes together... even the grammar is good! I usually find that online stories often lack one or more of those things; sometimes the characters and the story are compelling but the author writes in such a way that I lose interest (way too many details, everything is spelled out in case the reader doesn´t have a brain, etc) or bad grammar gets me too irritated to keep reading but I just love Muffin to pieces... both the story and the character! I can´t wait to read more so I hope you update soon!

Cheers,

NightBird