rate_review Reviews

I checked your story LITERALLY every freaking day. EVERYDAY. Thank you oh so much for updating finally ^___^ I love this story too much, although I kinda called the whole "Asher's behind everything" thing. it's not that it was predictable, I just have a way of predicting things. I do it a lot with movies and such.

And I'm glad we finally get to learn Muffin's past!!!! I seriously can't wait. :3 Yay!!!!

AAAARGGHH!!! AGAIN I thought it was an update! EVIL YOU! Pleeeease throw us a scrap soon? We're starving! ;o)

Happy birthday! I'm not a stalker lol I just looked at ur profile to see if you had more stories and I was like woooah todays her birthday!!!! P.s. I miss muffin...

by the way the happy bday comment was mine I just forgot to put my name in LOL!

Wow.........I can't even begin to express to you how amazing this story is. Amazing, wonderful, spectacular, all these words cant explain how much I love this story. I'm pretty sure it's because this story is a good mix of angst, humor, and romance. Although I'm betting poor Muffin thinks he needs a more of the romance/love. haha

So I read this story on/off for 2 days. It would have been just one night, but I fell asleep. xD I was already exhausted from work, but when I found this story, I didn't want to go to sleep. Instead I tried to read it ALL in a span of just hours, and lemme tell ya.. your chapters are LONG! lol Not that that is a bad thing; I actually enjoy it. It just was really hard to get it all in to one night. I'm glad I didn't because I probably wouldn't have gotten the full effect of the story.

I almost didn't read the story because of the main character's nickname Muffin. I found it seriously weird and annoying at first. How superficial of me, right? I wasn't even gonna continue reading, but something compelled me to. I'm sooo glad I did now. I'm quite fond of the name Muffin now. :) Okay, this is already getting long (Sorry!), so I'mma mention just 2 more things...

OMG PORTOOOO! *weeps hysterically* I was devastated when he died. Oh, and when Muffin was googling stuff on the computer in the meeting.....oh my sweet jesus... T_T I couldn't even read it. I sooo knew it was coming! I did, honestly! But when it did, I was horrified. I had to walk away. I didn't even fully read it. I just skimmed here and there until it was over. I'm so pathetic. xD

Anyway wonderful story. I hope you update soon because I will be checking. :)

I am really sorry this story seems to have been abandoned. I enjoyed reading it very much and got spoiled by the fast updates when you first posted it. I hope you are well and nothing serious is going on in your life. Maybe Night Writer can finish it for you where you seem to be friends. Please don't take too much longer to update.

Okay!!!! Someone must be back to school!!!!

So!!!! Let the begging begin!!!!!

More! More!!! More!!! More! More!!! More!!!

(Now I'm going to picture Alexander Skarsgard as Alrick!!!!)

Thanks!!!!
R

WOW
Damn is this story good.
WOW

I started reade a couple of days ago and read through the first night even though i had to work the next day. Then I couldn't continue because I was so tired the next day... And your chapters are HUGE!

This story is hotter than many stories that have more sex your descriptions of the ppl and their behaviour are realistic and detailed and

WOW

This story is one of the very rare gems on the net. The reason why I wade through all the stories with the many immature (either story or writing), the horrible and the many average stories

Great job, thanks for sharing and please continue.

(I do not know if you changed any chapters after reading reviews that do not understand sth. but every time you explained sth I always thought: 'they should have known this.' I think these ppl have either been reading for a while and therefore forgot over time or they didn't really read it.)

*lurks* I'm still here.... and waiting~~~~~ xD

- nekoii

Love this story.. Can't wait for an update!!!