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Woah, those were an emotional two chapters! But you wrote it real well. I could feel the suspence, the adrenaline, in practically every word. Poor Muffin and Vincenzo! I hope Mario's okay. I mean, Muffin's logic seemed pretty sound to me, but still.... I like him, he's such a funny Italian. D: Is everything that's happened *really* Asher's fault? What's up with that? I hope not, but I have no idea. It's a good twist, though. Again, poor Muffin. If it really is Asher's fault, curse him for being an asshole. I mean, seriously, WTF? Still, I really am curious. I'm glad you updated and I hope there'smore to come soon. :O

You have got to be fucking kidding me. You come back after that long, and do THAT to us.

So happy to see a fresh chapter of Muffin and hello, when you said it was going to get crazy you certainly meant it! Can't wait to see what happens next. ;)

I love this story! I became addicted to it as soon as i started reading it all those months ago. =) I am anxious to hear what happens to muffin and the explanation of who Asher really is. Though, it is sad to think that Vincenzo is dead, or dying. I was really starting to like him...

Holy shit? That was so hardcore...

Ohhhhh ! The plot thicken !
I really hope that Vin is not dead !
And I absolutly refuse to believe that Asher know, and agree, of the human traffic...

Hey! I am so glad you're back! I've been a big fan since you published the first three chapters. Without competition this is my number one favorite Internet fiction!
Great chapter! Hope Vincenzo won't die! He is a great character.

p.s. I already saw you're list of recommended fiction in you're profile, and wondered if there are any other that you're a fan of. Could you name a few that you found good?

So Good!!
I'm reaaally happy you updated,
even though it made me want to cry...
i can't wait for more!

holy mother of

i doubt any of that is true or it is tainted as heck
VINCENZOOOOOOOO gooommmmbbbaaaa will totally be back. hopefully.
cruel. evil. heartless.
muffin is going to in such shock [ TREAT FOR SHOCK, warmth ariwar respsonivess semi-sit or prone. I am missing a step there.. but what ever,]

deff worth the wait!

Once we start thinking we know where this story's headed, you do a 180 on us and everything gets even more fucked up for Muffin!!!

I never would've guessed this story to turn out to be so action-packed and exciting, judging from the first few chapters. That's awesome. I hope Michael gets another hole put into his body. Do it Muffin do it!!! And I hope Vinny is still alive. Poor guy. First he almost dies from the explosion (due to Muffin) and now he's bleeding to death/has bled to death (due to Muffin). Muffin's like a jinxed charm. haha. anyway, awesome chapter and i enjoyed reading it!!