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Okay I´m a bit shocked right now....I didn´t expect this turn of events......at the moment I can´t say I like it or not.....
but I´m definitely waiting for the next chapter!

WTF, mate? Great chapter, lots of action and it really propelled the plot along. But seriously, WTF? I'm gonna beat Asher to a bloody pulp if he really is responsible. (I mean besides just keeping Muffin around his place.) And more and more I'm curious about Muffin's past. Like why is he homeless and what are his deep seeded issues, cause he's got them in spades! ok, patiently awaiting the next chapter!

I love the story and can't believe that I haven't seen it before! I found Muffin to be a bit annoying but finally came to realize that is his way of coping with difficult situations. I didn't know what to think of Asher until I read this one line in chapter 15, "Instead of coming down to my level, he was pulling me up to him."... I realize the context of that statement had different meaning but it seems to describe what Asher has been trying to accomplish with Muffin all along. Chapter 19 left off with a rather ominous cliffhanger but hoping Muffin gets through it with not too many more nightmares and that this guy was lying and Asher was all along trying to stop Michael. It would be depressing to see that Asher was a monster all along.

Poor Muffin, he just gets heaped so much ontop of him. But if he had shut his mouth he might have kept safe but NOOO, don't listen to the Italian man being nice to you for once. More please ^_^.

Great story, read it all in two days!!! This is a strange question, but do you watch/read Hetalia???

OMFG, you have just made my Friday, no my whole weekend, no my whole fucking year!!!!!! I just saw you updated and OMG, I think about this story all the friggen time, wondering when I'm gonna read about why Muffin needs to run!!!!!!! I am so fucking happy you updated!!!!!! Ok, I just had to get that off my chest. So, ok, gonna go now and read it! Actually, if I read it now, I won't have anything to look forward to until you update again. Maybe I'll wait....ok, no, I gotta find out about poor Muffin and his running! Hahahha

OMG! You don't know how relieved I am to see an update!
I was so afraid that you had abandoned this fic T_T
Yaaayy Thank you for this update...and it is O.O fcking nerve wrecking to wait for another week !!!!
I want to know what will happen dammit!!!XD
I want Muff to kill of Michael! He doesn't deserve it to live! fcking bastard! and omg
Vincenzo...cute little *cough* Vincenzooo! please don't kill him! I love him!!!
And Michael's pal is quite smart if I may say so....Trying to confuse Muff about Asher...thought Muff does give Asher the fault of all his
problems...but still having a real person say it...is more assuring.

I'm actually really happy now, because I know you haven't left this fic :D
Thank you very much and please update soon <3 *singsongs*

awww. update. Just update. please. You don't understand how it feels to have this problem where the ground i'm walking on just ends.

Ok, so it took me a few hours to finish the chapter; life keeps getting in the way! Anyway, really enjoyed this chapter! I'm confused tho,so many questions: did Michael and his goons bomb the apt. bldg? Are the hostages the ones from the apt. bldg? Why are they being tortured and their body parts cut out? And of course Asher is responsible for Muffin's problems! Muffin only saved Asher oh so long ago, and he's getting repaid by Asher putting him thru hell! Michael's after revenge, right? And by one of your reader review comments, thankfully Vincenzo's still alive? I hope so! Muffin needs him! He better off Michael while he still has the chance! GREAT chapter! I'm SO excited you'll be updating next week! Yay!!!!!!

I did not mean to imply that I disliked the last chapter. I enjoy being tortured. Call me a masochist. I am totally stressed for poor Muffin. I'm lovin Vincenzo more and more and it might be hot to see him get smexy with muffin.