rate_review Reviews

I love you. You make my life so much better for the however-long-takes me to read Muffin, again and again, and I love you most of all when you update. I don't smile much lately, but I almost burst with happiness when Burnt Muffin appeared (I know that was a while ago now...so I'm a tad late with reviewing. I've read it many times since). But yes. I would make a shrine but I wouldn't have much to put in it. Oh, and I think your two-way writing thing with Night Writer is a great idea. I guess it means one of you feels guilty if you're behind with updating? :D Anyway, thanks.

Just wondering... are you also known as bloodyxunicorns?

You know I love your story but you can't leave us hanging like this...this is a terrible cliffhanger. ^^"
There are so many things still unknown or at least unclear. PLEASE update faster this time...*reducedtobegging*
Other than that: Wonderful chapter as expected. xxx

How the heck is this going to work out T^T Everything has gotten so dark and sad. I'm really currious what that talk was all about. Stupid meddling people... How will this make them react? He sure gained a whole lot of enemies now. And he put himself in a tight spot. I can’t wait for more T^T

im shocked, bewildered.
lol. im upset.

WOW it's like I had a feeling you updated LOL I wa so happy! Now I'm just upset cause I want more!! This stroy is simply addictive (In a very good way of course :). You know there I probably already mentioned it but there just aren't that many stories where you just feel so much sympathy for the main character that you just root for them with all your heart. Another thing I love about this story is how unperditable and smart your main character is. I was so proud when he got rid of the cell and at Anna's place! I just can't imagine what would happen after he told everything. and I have to tell you-I was on the edge of my seat when Vincenzo started yelling-And then of course they got Muffin out-Not fair! Vincenzo nomintaed Muffin? and what the hell did Asher mean by asking him if he wants to take over?

I know you're doing your best but please update as soon as you can I can't take the suspence!!
Happy new year :)

You have me very confussed as what I should be hoping for.

Do I want Asher to become all mushy and fall for Muffin?
Or Vincenzo?
Clearly Alrik and Vincezo are feeling more than a little guilty about setting Muffin up to die.
But guilt doesn't mean they're good people.

This is an interesting arch in the story. You've gone 360 on Muffin.
He was just some scarred kid living on the street.
He does something decent. i.e. not leaving Asher to die.
And his repayment. Being chosen to die.

Asher, Alrik and Vincezo, all bad people who in their own way have come to care for him.
And the fact that they can be very likable characters makes Muffin's defection hard to take.

Good lord, I have nothing constructive to say but this is a riveting story and I will wait patiently for your next installment.

Oh Muffin what did you do?!
How is this ever going to be fixed? I know that Asher, Alrick and Vincento are suppose to be the bad guys, but you got to love them. ;)

Nooo, what was Muffin thinking? well, maybe I would have done the same thing if I were him but...Why is Asher so complicated? I'm pretty sure Michael was lying, but still... why is everyone so complicated? haha.
Anyway, thanks for updating, I wanna see what happens next =)!