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I am a new reader !! I am completely adicted to your story!!! It is full of suspens and sexual tension lol I am in love with Muffin : he has a strong personality!! I can't wait for the next chapters!!! Please release!!!
Sorry if my english isn' t very good but I am french.

geeeeee.. I'll die of boredom waiting for next! Can't wait

Yes. He's 18.

ALRIGHT MAAAAAAAAAAN!!!! *ding ding ding ding ding* I feel like I've hit jackpot. ^___^
well, it's just ONE jackpot amongst the gazillion -triple banana- machines but well... It's a hit. and a hit is a hit. *feels happy*

I wonder who will hit jackpot on guessing muffin's name before you reveal it. *ponders*

speaking of muffin....
I'm beginning... to dislike him...
*frowns*
tsk... his way of doing things... are just too... well... it's like he gave up.
he didn't even try to understand things.
he didn't' even prod nor investigate.
he was in the HEAT CENTER OF EVERYTHING, a perfect location to find out EVERYTHING. but he did not do it.
sure... he found out some crucial stuffs, but instead of taking that and doing some understanding and investigating further himself. he goes and gives up and run's to the police...

*sighs*

well... true... i have no right to be mad at muffin... knowing what shit he had to go though. surely. he feels like just escaping this all. taking the, easy way out...
but... argh... from the outside, if you see this through... nothing will happen from just "complaining to the police"
nothing immediate will happen at least. i think.
for muffin especially... doesn't he know? that confessing all this... there's no way he's gonna get the freedom he wants after this.
the police are gonna keep tabs on him now. they're prolly gonna lock him up somewhere, for "safety" measures.

but well... who knows what will actually happen.
its your story here.

but all in all...

i feel sad for asher.

everything is going downhill for him it seems. his plans are failing. his potential love interest is betraying him... poor asher. and to think he had cared for muffin....

and muffin... i just feel... disappointed in him. i guess...

okay...

its 4am = __ =

good night~

I've just reread the whole story. It is just that darned good. I'm really curious about what impact Muffin's little talk will have. In the last chapters, if not the whole story, it has been pointed out again and again that Muffin really doesn't know anything. It makes me wonder how dirty his dirt is. Aaaaa.... I'm so curious! I want to know moooore. T-T And I have this insane craving for muffins...

LOL Muffin a vigilante...i just pictured him in Robbin's suit (from Batman). in his yellow mask and green tights...yeaaah. anyway it would be so funny (not) if Ruddy were to suddenly appear. I can imagine Muffin having muffins at that. XD After that every time someone tells Muffin something he'll want to say "pics or it didn't happen". LOL. that's one way to keep people from lying to you.

I just wanted to say that although I haven't commented yet, I've been reading this story for quite some time. You are doing an amazing job with it. I love it to pieces; it's moved me to laughter and tears. And after that last chapter, my heart is officially broken. I'm still crying. But I just wanted to let you know that every chapter you write is golden.

Omg, he didn't!
Yes he did!XD I'm so glad! it's like little Muffin has grown up!
But I'm afraid now! what if Asher takes revenge on his sweet diner T_T
But it's sad cause I like Alrick and MarioxD dammit!
And Asher is hot as hell, and I loved the part with the bitch Lisa?
And the kiss! damn I'd say it was worth itXD but everyone disturbed them! and I'm frustrated! I need my love/hate-sex!!! *grumble*
I love angst, but this just filled my angst-battery and it is now spilling over!
oh, the questions! What will happen to Muffin now? What will Asher do when he finds out? how will Alrick think about Muffin now?
Vincenzo, what will he do?
Though I miss the badmouthed brat, I like this daredevil Muffin tooXD ahhaah
maybe you should name a chapter Daredevil Muffin?XD
Anyways, I love the names you give the chapters, they suit wellXD
Thank you for updating! I loved this update just like I love all your updates!
Dammit! I need answers! and I hope you can update soon! very very soon T_T
cause this time we had to wait a long time O_OXD though I'm glad you updated but stillXD
update, update, update, update, update
*cheer*

Sorry for the second review *cough*

but *slaps some sense in you*
WTF?! your pathetic writing in your arse! you are an amazing writer! one of the best! I love your story very much because of your WRITING!
all these fans that are reading this story disagree with you downgrading (sorry for my spellingXD) yourself!
You own, your story owns, your characters own, your plot owns! there aren't alot of writer who have all those!
So don't ever say that you aren't good and blabal! that isn't true!
and if you want to become a writer one day, I do think you will make it. With this story it will be very easy for you! because you! you = amazing

xD
That's all! hope you will update soon! and never say crappy writing or w/e againxD or I'm gonna pay you a visit, and I don't think you will like it *cracks whip*

muffin, always feelin' guilty. i wonder what new explosions will come out from his talk to the cops. awesome chapter!

How funny would it be if Muffin ended up with... DUN DUN DUN!! Eliza! Or Daniel! Or agent Ruddy!
Well you did say anything could happen...

I love this story so much that I've read it a couple of times and I keep checking the main page of M/M to see if you've updated about every day! ): I am a sad, sad person lol. That's why I cried tears of blood last time, 'cause Muffin was on the front page, and I got butterflies in my stomach but then there was no chapter...

I'm gonna go be a creep elsewhere, lol :D can't wait till the next chapter! This is so exciting 'cause I have no idea where this could be going! Which is refreshing on AFF.