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August 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please update :( I'd PAY you to if I could.
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July 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I've read this fic twice now, and I love it. It is easily one of my favorite fics (including fanfics). I love Muffin and Asher and the dynamic of their relationship. Every single one of their scenes is sizzling, and it's obvious they care about each other at least a little bit. Speaking of which, there are people who seem to think Muffin is going to end up with Vincenzo, and please tell me that isn't going to happen. Asher is so hot! And he and Muffin have such sexual tension! Anyway, this is an amazing fic. You're an amazing writer. And I really really really hope you continue this story. Soon.
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July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This story was recommended to me by another writer..I've read through all 21 chapters to find that it hasn't been updated in months...Noooooooooooooooo!! You can't leave it hanging like this...please! All these secrets and mysteries hinted at are driving me crazy...I want answers!! With "Muffin" spilling his guts to the FEDS, what's going to happen to Asher??? please update soon, this story is both unusual and fantastic! Kudos for creating such intriguing and complex characters.
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July 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Muffin is definatly the best story on the whole site. I enjoy every second of reading it, I love every single one of the characters and there has never been a boring moment in the whole story. I can't wait for the next chapter :)
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June 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi (waves hands to get attenion of author) Are you ever going to finish this story? I miss my Muffin and would like to find out how the story ends. I hope that whenever you decide to finish it that Muffin finds happiness. Please don't leave us all hanging much longer. I really love this story, it is very well written. I am just afraid that I will lose track of it, and then miss what happens after keeping up with it for this long, when you finally do complete it. I BEG you, PLEASE... PLEASE... GIVE US MORE MUFFIN. I know you must be busy but don't forget your loyal fans who have been faithfully following and reviewing it from the beginning.
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June 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
UPDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATEEEE PLEASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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May 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe he fking snitched.
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May 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Uhm, hi! :)
I found this story after reading several enthusiastic recommendations; I usually wait for stories to be finished (I'm too impatient to wait for new chapters XD), but after reading the first chapter out of curiosity I just couldn't stop! "Muffin" is seriously amazing, it's awesomely written and has everything you could want: well-developed characters, a great plot, and yummy sex.
Gotta say my favourite character is Vincenzo :D Oh gods, he's hilarious and generally a wonderful character. And am I sensing some feelings towards our Muffin, mmh? I'd love to see something between them (was the "hard thing" poking against Muffin when he first woke up after being kidnapped with Vincenzo what I thought it was, or was I imagining things? *__*), but maybe I'm just hoping for the impossible XD By the way, I'm Italian, and coincidentally a friend of mine's name is Vincenzo Giordani...now I chuckle everytime I see him XD
And Alrick is sweet <3 My good German boy <3 I hope he doesn't turn bad, I really like him as well.
No need to say I'm looking forward to the next chapter (there will be one, won't there? *puppy eyes*)...agh, Muffin, revenge always brings trouble, be careful! I can't believe Vincenzo and Alrick don't love you :(
You're writing a wonderful story which I'll definitely recommend to everybody, and I thank you for the great time I had reading these 21 chapters. Oh, I apologize for my bad English and my boring rec, as well! Cheers :D
I found this story after reading several enthusiastic recommendations; I usually wait for stories to be finished (I'm too impatient to wait for new chapters XD), but after reading the first chapter out of curiosity I just couldn't stop! "Muffin" is seriously amazing, it's awesomely written and has everything you could want: well-developed characters, a great plot, and yummy sex.
Gotta say my favourite character is Vincenzo :D Oh gods, he's hilarious and generally a wonderful character. And am I sensing some feelings towards our Muffin, mmh? I'd love to see something between them (was the "hard thing" poking against Muffin when he first woke up after being kidnapped with Vincenzo what I thought it was, or was I imagining things? *__*), but maybe I'm just hoping for the impossible XD By the way, I'm Italian, and coincidentally a friend of mine's name is Vincenzo Giordani...now I chuckle everytime I see him XD
And Alrick is sweet <3 My good German boy <3 I hope he doesn't turn bad, I really like him as well.
No need to say I'm looking forward to the next chapter (there will be one, won't there? *puppy eyes*)...agh, Muffin, revenge always brings trouble, be careful! I can't believe Vincenzo and Alrick don't love you :(
You're writing a wonderful story which I'll definitely recommend to everybody, and I thank you for the great time I had reading these 21 chapters. Oh, I apologize for my bad English and my boring rec, as well! Cheers :D
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May 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The site cut my previous review! D:
The rest is here, and sorry for the trouble.
...And Alrick is sweet <3 My good German boy <3 I hope he doesn't turn bad, I really like him as well.
No need to say I'm looking forward to the next chapter (there will be one, won't there? *puppy eyes*)...agh, Muffin, revenge always brings trouble, be careful! I can't believe Vincenzo and Alrick don't love you :(
You're writing a wonderful story which I'll definitely recommend to everybody, and I thank you for the great time I had reading these 21 chapters. Oh, and I apologize for my bad English, too! Cheers :D
The rest is here, and sorry for the trouble.
...And Alrick is sweet <3 My good German boy <3 I hope he doesn't turn bad, I really like him as well.
No need to say I'm looking forward to the next chapter (there will be one, won't there? *puppy eyes*)...agh, Muffin, revenge always brings trouble, be careful! I can't believe Vincenzo and Alrick don't love you :(
You're writing a wonderful story which I'll definitely recommend to everybody, and I thank you for the great time I had reading these 21 chapters. Oh, and I apologize for my bad English, too! Cheers :D
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May 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I have just discovered your story through "the slash pile" community. I can't believe I would have missed such an exciting and great story!!I mean I am not a big fan of aff.net and your story is definetely a gem in the middle of a lot of shitty stories (I don't want to offense anyone but hey that is only my opinion!)and it is been asuch a long time since I have been touched this much by a story *_*
Okay first, I love Asher since he is this mysterious dark guy but I still have some difficulties to really get what he wants! I believe that he is becoming more and more attached to Muffin and doesn't really how to handle these feelings. I think I will be in the same turmoil than he is and especially in his "line of work"!(Maybe I am completely wrong here but hey i try to justify his actions^^)However, my favorite character is ... Muffin!As a lot of people I love to see how he is growing up and how fucking fragile and sensitive but also strong he is!He copes with awful situations and he deals with them with what he does the best: sharp tongue!^^Anyways,I don't know why he didn't go earlier to FBI!!I mean, come on, Asher is always bringing him into crappy situations!
In any case, I wanted to tell you to continue this story until the end and then to get it published!!!You are an amazing writer and this is definetely one of the best original fictions I have ever read!
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Okay first, I love Asher since he is this mysterious dark guy but I still have some difficulties to really get what he wants! I believe that he is becoming more and more attached to Muffin and doesn't really how to handle these feelings. I think I will be in the same turmoil than he is and especially in his "line of work"!(Maybe I am completely wrong here but hey i try to justify his actions^^)However, my favorite character is ... Muffin!As a lot of people I love to see how he is growing up and how fucking fragile and sensitive but also strong he is!He copes with awful situations and he deals with them with what he does the best: sharp tongue!^^Anyways,I don't know why he didn't go earlier to FBI!!I mean, come on, Asher is always bringing him into crappy situations!
In any case, I wanted to tell you to continue this story until the end and then to get it published!!!You are an amazing writer and this is definetely one of the best original fictions I have ever read!
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