rate_review Reviews

I love your story. I've said this before but I just do not know where you're going with it.
Yes Asher is a bad guy. He's a horrible person.
Muffin is just innocent and sweet. And there are just parts of me that somehow want him to have whatever his heart desires.

Oh my! Yes an UPDATE! This is the BEST b-day present EVER! Please, please, please tell me the updates will be soonish?! I realize though, real life is unpredictable and a pain in the ass. This is a beautiful piece of work by the way!

Hope there's more Muffin someday!

Never in my wildest dreams did I think that a story on aff would make me cry! Chapter 20 was brutal. I was falling in love with Asher throughout the story and in that chapter I felt betrayed! Then I had to remind myself that it was fiction lol, but I really was upset. And to top it off Im guessing that by some miraculous twist, it will all be a misunderstanding, that Asher will be the good guy and that ultimately muffin has betrayed him by talking to the cops, at which point I will shed more tears. This is turning to be an emotional rollercoaster and I'm loving it. I was up all night Reading the chapters back to back (I've onlyrecently discovered you) and ended up going to work late :/
pls update soon, the intimate interaction between Asher and muffin is actually physically thrilling :S
ps: does mario have a thing for muffin?

Pls update soon, pls update soon, pls update soon
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I'm done being stalkerish :)
xx update soon xx

Hey Mahsa,

Hope your summer went well. I was just wondering if you were going to finish this wonderful story? I noticed it's been eight lllooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnggggggggggggggggg months since your last update. I've been missing cute little Muffin!

Ok, well, just checking in.......I look everyday for an update; maybe I'll get lucky soon??????


Lisa

Let's all bow down to Avernion b/c he/she will lead us minions to the palace of Mahsa and Muffinland.

@Avernion: omfg, your comments were hysterical! I read them outloud and I fell out of my chair in hysterics!

You have a wonderful imagination and I just hope that your pleas work! :)

WHy wont you updat

I second this hahaha.

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lol. Avernion has just posted the best update plea in the history of this site.

Once upon a time, there was a great author. She wrote about muffin-abuse like no other. But her one talent, the one who raised her above all the rest, was her talent to create suffering. Fans from far and wide in the kingdom of AFF came to cry at the footsteps of her story, begging for the updates to come alive again. The starvation for muffin crept over the land like a plague. Children were crying themselves to sleep, asking “Why? Why?” Men and women alike gazed into the horizon, begging to see the winds of change. To see the next muffin in all of its electrical glory. Days turned to weeks, weeks turned to months, and the suffering continued. Muffin-tears fell from the eyes of the people of the Kingdom AFF. Would their Muffin in white armor appear to ease their pain? Would the end of their starvation come? Together they all joined hands, raised their eyes, and gazed after their Muffin. Be he cinnamon, apple or blueberry. Chocolate, vanilla or lime. They just wanted him to come. And they wept.