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Ohhhhhh myyyyy GAWD u updated!!!
*dancing around room*
k I'm gonna go read now :D

I couldn't belive my eyes when I saw this story, it's been so long! I'm so sorry life was messy for you, but I'm very happy you are back! This story is simply amazing, and I'm very worried/exhited about the ending... I have no idea which way you will take it, although things looks pretty dark right now... I don't feel I can blame Muffin, however, he has been pushed far beyond his limits too many times, the poor boy... I'm just scared or him... and, since I do love the bad boys I love Asher too! I won't dare hope it will end up alright for both of them, but I will secretly cling to that until the last chapter... -hugs pillow-

I saw the update, and cried T^T

FINALLY! I thought you had abandoned it. Also, you can't tell us you have four chapters done and then NOT post them! Gah! Cruel! But am so glad you updated. Made my day.

OMG, OMG, OMG, you just made my whole day, my whole night, my whole friggen weekend!!!!!!! I have been anxiously, ok, not so anxiously awaiting the next chapter!!!! I'm so freaking excited! Ok, gotta go read, I think I have to re-read the last chapter to re-familiarize myself with what's going on.


Thank you, thank you, thank you for updating!!!! :)

Yay, an update! I almost gave up hope D: but just almost. I kept hoping for a miracle, and well, it happened. Hurray!
I can't get enough of Muffin :D I want to know how it ends

This is the single greatest story on the internet. I can't wait for more. I love it. Fucking love it. (and I'm desperately hoping for a happy ending)

Damn girl!!!!!! It's good to have you back!!!!!!!

Ess Eff!!!!! That's my town!!!!!! Best of luck with school!!!!!

(So if I look regularly for more Muffin, you can bet a whole lot of other peeps do also!!!!!)

Chapter 22 "Bitter Muffin"

So the cops tell Muffin that Asher is a mobster, a killer and an extortionist.
(They forgot dangerously sexy with a hard spot for Muffins!!!!!) Love that the cops are
predictable, scaring the kid into further cooperation and am pleased about the
nice lady you threw in there to protect Muffin!!!!

(Can't wait to find out Muffin's real name for some reason!!!!! HA!)

Really love the fact that Asher is soooooooo into Muffin. He can't wait to get his
hands all over and into that!!!! (As well as other body parts!!!)

Worth the wait?! You bet!!!!! Hope to see the sexy Alrick and Vincenzo soon!!!!

Thank you!
R

EEk! Sp errors! HA!

Totally worth the wait! Hopefully you'll update soon, I want to know thier reaction after the action :)

Brilliant chapter :D n I'm really glad that you've got the rest written up.
You sorta went into past tense half way through, as if he wasn't narrating it as it happened but rather of when it happened, if that makes sense. Was that intentional? Or was I just too eager to read it and read it wrong?
Anyway that last line makes me think ull have me in tears in the upcoming chapters :/
lookin forward to it :)