rate_review Reviews

I love this story!
i found i the other day and i have finally read all 23 chapters posted and already i feel Thursday is to far away T-T

I love the chars especially Muffin, Alrick and Vincenzo. Its so obvious Vincenzo cares if not a little for Muffin but he just doesnt want to lose his hard image.
Alricks our loveable German ^^
Asher im not to sure about as when he does pop up in the story hes a bit hard to connect with ( for me anyway) as his personality keeps everyone at a distance.

Counting down the days till thursday XD
in the meantime i may have to read the chaps again xD

how about a simple bad mufin, or that state where it's shape is distorted?

WOW, alrick didn't tell him to run.Looks like someone blow up the apartment just to motivate Muffin to go to the cops.
Or am I worng?

Cheesy is right. But so fucking adorable. What does Alrick know, though? I can't wait until next Thursday. Have I mentioned your god status?

Wonderful chapter, very fluffy in parts, but you are not fooling me! Bad things ahead, I'm sure... they are not tastes, but hot/cold muffin? And what's wrong with tart muffing...? sounds like an interesting chapter? ;) There's sweet/sour... err.. you're right, this was hard... ;)

Thanks for writing despite everything that's been going on! I really love this story. I've read it twice. The thing is, I really, really like Alrick, and I really like Muffin and you have me all torn up wanting them both to be ok. Somehow it's really easy to believe that Alrick is some sort of dark knight, works on the wrong side of the law but not a bad guy. If nothing else, you've done a really good job of pulling me into the characters and keeping me guessing about what will happen next!

Sour, salty, bittersweet, charred, sticky, cloying...

Blurry muffin, burned muffin, sour muffin, sweet muffin, alien muffin. I think I should stop here...

Glad to see the update :3 Got a headache, but still needed to read it xD

Does Asher die? Please don't kill Vincenzo. I can't decide if I want Muffin with the former or the latter. I love them both. Not sure I'm keen on the idea of a threesome, either...

You said it's almost finished, which worries me. I guess I don't want the truth about Muffin's past, the truth about Asher's organisation/work, the issues between Asher and Vincenzo (jealousy over Muffin?) AND the final outcome all squished into a few chapters. But I guess you know what you're doing. Also, I don't want it to end simply because I love the characters. I only follow this story with Munez's 'Dandruff' and AmuseMe's 'Crappy Predicament' on AFF but both those stories seem to have been abandoned. At least you're still updating!!

Woaaa so the end is near! I don't even know what to expect from it since the story is so unpredictable...But i do know that i want something to happen between Muffin and Vincenzo...there gotta be something between them!!AAh this is so confusing...Thank you for posting.Totally love the story.

I couldn't believe my eyes when I saw that you'd updated last week. I love the last two chapters, I think it was about time we got a bit of cheesiness from those two =D. I like Muffin's interaction with Vicenzo too.

I don't know about titles, how about Spicy Muffin hehe. Well, anyway, see you soon.