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IT'S THURSDAY!

Mmmm Muffin and Vincenzo together... mmm.. pleaase??? mmm.

Amazing...

You keep making things more interesting. Good chapter. Now I'm dying for everything to work out. Please, please....does Asher have to be a bad guy. Can't Muffin just finally give in, please! If the angst is anything to go by, the other end will be just as good. Thank you for another post!

Muffin is Matthew!! The name is a good fit. The flashback/freakout scene was so good.. you really are a good writer. It's starting to get really tense. I keep thinking Muffin is going to get exposed, with every dumb thing he does. What if Daniel finds out from Asher that Muffin shouldn't know about his background? Now he's in the friggin trunk.. he's so doomed.

And omg, all those hints of Vinny and Muffin ~sexual tension~ were real. Vincenzo seems to be in some sort of pissing contest with Asher or he's just a crabby guy. Does he want to use Muffin to get at Asher, or does he want a piece of Muffin and that's the source of the irritation?

Oh. My. God. I want to marry you so much for updating!
Yay for progress on Asher and Muffin. I have to say I want to learn about Muffin's background too, but I guess we can only know as much as Asher has so far.
The first thing that came to mind for a chapter title was 'Wasabi Muffin'. Haha, yuck.

Awe. Okay, see you Thursday then. D; (It has never felt to so far away before~ especially with school...)

This is one of the most bizarre stories I have ever read--and I mean that in a good way! I wish I could figure out what's going on and what's going to happen next... each time I think I've got it, you send me on another wild ride! Also, I'm so hoping for a happy ending. I do my best to never read anything that doesn't have a happy ending. There are too many sad endings in real life than to fill up my imagination with them, too. So... if there's any way that might possibly influence you... um... and also maybe to update again soon... it would make me really happy. :)

Wow, two updates in a week! You just made my weekend!

So, Asher definitely cares for Muffin. Muffin's fears from the last chapter, and chapters previous, I think now are unfounded. Just simple things like Asher holding his hand, getting him Anna's Diner on a keychain, wanting to know all about his favorite things, stuff like that, that proves that Asher cares a great deal for Muffin. Maybe even loves him in his own mob-mentality way. :)

I am just so curious now as to what the hell happened in the house when Asher and Muffin were gone? Alrick's drunk already and telling Muffin he should have run. Why? What's that "business" meeting all about? I don't know if I can wait until next Thursday! lol But, it's better than waiting for months, so I'll take next Thursday.

You know, I got so caught up with the last part of the chapter, I never commented on the beginning. The banter between Muffin and Vincenzo could be a tv sitcom. Seriously. They have me cracking up! The whole Webster dictionary letter about changing the definition of some word, omg, so funny! Muffin is just adorable and can come back with these quips; it's unbelievable! Him and Vincenzo sound like an old married couple bickering all the time.

Anyway, great job, great chapter and I can't wait for the next one! Have a great weekend Mahsa!

Hi, I just want to say that I love your story. I know you probably get this a lot, but please update soon. You are really leaving me feeling uneasy about Muffin's betrayal. How will Asher react when he finds out? Even though they are so sweet together right now, I get the feeling that it's going to get worse before it gets better. I'm sucker for the all "happily after." Please don't make me cry. If your next chapter is titled as something like "poisoned muffin" or "discarded muffin..." I'll be really depressed. Anyway, you did a really good job writing this story. The character development is deep, not one-dimensional like some of the other stories. Keep up the good work and I hope to hear from you soon. :)

Oh my god I love this story so much I never want it to end! It makes me die inside knowing that you're ending it soon :( :(