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Matthew.

I tell you. despite the bad sad sick not-happy situation.

I was so freaking Happy i tell you.

Matthew.

WE FREAKING HAVE A NAME PEOPLE~~~!!!!!

MATTHEW! Matthew, Matthew, Matthew, Matthew, Matthew, Matthew, Matthew, Matthew, Matthew, Matthew, Matthew, Matthew, Matthew,
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Maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaatttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttthhhhhhhhheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

MATTHEW

Matthew,

MATTHEW
MATTHEW
MATTHEW
MATTHEW
MATTHEW
MATTHEW
MATTHEW
MATTHEW
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

MATTHEW
MATTHEW
MATTHEW
MATTHEW
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MATTHEW, MATTHEW, MATTHEW, MATTHEW, MATTHEW, MATTHEW, MATTHEW, MATTHEW, MATTHEW, MATTHEW, MATTHEW, MATTHEW, MATTHEW, MATTHEW, MATTHEW, MATTHEW, MATTHEW, MATTHEW, yes this entire review is gonna be nothing but his name. MATTHEW, MATTHEW, MATTHEW,
MATTHEW, MATTHEW, MATTHEW, MATTHEW, MATTHEW, MATTHEW, MATTHEW, MATTHEW, MATTHEW, MATTHEW, MATTHEW, MATTHEW, MATTHEW, MATTHEW,
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MATTHEW, yes people are gonna get annoyed with these Matthews spewwing all over the page MATTHEW, MATTHEW, MATTHEW, MATTHEW,
MATTHEW, MATTHEW, MATTHEW, MATTHEW, but I dont care MATTHEW, MATTHEW, MATTHEW, MATTHEW, MATTHEW, MATTHEW, MATTHEW, MATTHEW

Okay. enough Matthew's.... Muffin's probably in some corner covering his ears glaring at me murderously, mentally throwing rocks into my pond. but Matthew dear, not everyone's ponds/lakes are as serene as you think them to be.

:P

Have ya tried 'hungry muffin' ?
crazy muffin, mad muffin, sad muffin, dead muffin (NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!), empty muffin, fake muffin, frozen muffin, scary muffin.

as for flavours... try exotic fruits? avocado muffin, durian muffin, mangosteen muffin, starfruit muffin, papaya muffin, chestnut muffin, hazlenut muffin, pistacio muffin, fudge muffin, brownie muffin, dark muffin, dark chocolate muffin, rainbow sprinkles muffin, green tea muffin, basil muffin, thyme muffin, oregano muffin, spice muffin, orange muffin, savoury muffin, sweet muffin, delicious muffin, tasteless muffin, inedible muffin. Hehehehe I'm having too much fun.

And yeah. Muffin should have seen it coming. AS IT asher did not know all about him. AS IF. :P
I wonder... what other secrets that folder Asher has holds...

I wonder...... Has Muffin completely gone nuts. locking himself up in a confined space. what happened to his claustrophobia? he did have claustrophobia didn't he.... bah. he's full of phobia's. XD What fear of water / cars / moving vehicles.
But really.... this is closing to an end...

and it looks like its gonna be a hell of a series of chaotic events towards the end.... some one is gonna die right? im getting that vibe....

who the hell is gonna die man...

suddenly... a happy ending seems like a lost dream to me...

Oh god~~~ what's gonna happen....

BRACE YOURSELVES!!!!!


;3 chao

- nekoii

Wow, revisiting Muffin's tragedy made me cry all over again. And how the HELL did Asher get all this info? And the phots? I mean, schools don't release information at the drop of a hat; there's a lot of red tape that you need to go thru. And you need proper identification; they won't release info like school records to just any Tom, Dick or Harry (or Asher). And the pictures; the pictures of the family before and pictures of the car accident, how did he get these? I get the horrible feeling he had something to do with the car accident. Why tho? Why did he wait so long to "arrange" to meet Muffin? I mean, Muffin was in foster homes; it must have been a few years until Asher "arranged" his mugging attempt. I just don't know why.

Matthew seems like a fitting name. I'm also biased; it's my youngest kids' name.

And I'm still rooting for Asher. Deep down, I believe Asher does love Muffin (in his own way) Altho there may be some tension w/Vincenzo, I don't see Muffin and Vincenzo together.

I just keep thinking back to when Muffin was looking over the folder. When he saw his name written on the folder, it just brought all his memories flooding back. All these memories he was trying to bury, to forget, they all came back in full force. His defense mechanism was to push his memories as far back in his mind as they would go, in order for him to function. Now everything is right there on the surface again. He's going to crack, and now he's hiding in the trunk of a car! I hope he doesn't start panicking and I hope there's a little latch in there where he can open the trunk once they've stopped.

Anyway, awesome chapter, as usual. I don't want to think of this story ending; there are so many loose ends. What exactly does Asher do? Will the cops find them? What is Asher's involvement w/Muffin/Matthew's past? I guess I'll just have to wait patiently to find out.

Can't wait for the next installment!

Reading this story made me crave a muffin lol So I went downstairs and grabbed myself a chocolate chocolate chip muffin. I've been nibbling on it throughout the story. :P

Anyway, I personally find this brilliantly written. There's a few words here and there that aren't quite correct. Like ... it was either this chapter or the previous, you wrote waste when it should have been waist ... just little things like that, easily overlooked.

I look forward to reading more.

i hate to come to conclusions, but the wording in several situations makes this seem like this story is headed for an unhappy ending...i can't help liking asher and i really want him to be with muffin...i mean, it's obvious that he has a soft spot for little matthew...i suppose it would be too much to ask if we should brace ourselves or anticipate a happy ending ??

How about Crispy Muffin, or Hot Muffin, Cold Muffin, Uncooked Muffin or Overcooked Muffin? =P. I don't know, it depends on the chapter, though.

I love when you write angsty muffin, really, I swear I almost cried over Matthew's tragedy =P, Matthew, I like the name, I somehow imagined that his name started with M, also, that Asher knew more than he let Muffin see, however, Asher it's such a creep, he even had notes from Muffin's teachers and pictures of his family. Tsk tsk. It was logical, all that month he spent recovering from the "mugging" he was also investigating him, I guess.

I can't believe you said it's almost over, even though I'm eager to find out the truth of everything I don't want to let go the characters. But anyway, everything has an ending...right?

See you, hopefully soon!

Yup!!!!
You made me cry!!!!!! HA!

Mathew!!! Great name!!!!! Fitting!!!!

Love Vincenzo!!!!!! Sexy beast!!!!!!

(Uber Sexy!!!!!) Oh yeah!!!! I'll make you scream my name!!!

Don't know what that was all about but I LIKED IT!!!!!!!

Thank you!!!

R

Motherfucker. Not you, but just in general. Damn it.

Um so much to say don't know where to start...ok. First I love this story! You are an incredible writer, I've probably said that before XD This chapter was so...intense. I want Muffin to get his vengence, but I also want him to realize he loves these people. Asher is a horrble (loveable..in a strange way) person and I know he most love Muffin, but really what does he expect? He just makes Muffin hate him more (though he loves him) I wish Our Venz could just take him and run away (as an option >_> cus I love Venz...he's my Boo <3) yet I wish Asher could do something right for once! I still hope Muffin doesn't get them arrested. Ugh so hard! They should pay for their contribution to his miseary, at the same time I don't want them to go to jail XD anywho...this was a long as rant for no reason lol. I love this story, still a favoroite, so glad you came back, and I will cry when this end...>_> sad but it's true...I'm a wuss

AND one more thing!!! don't you dare leave me again!! this story is too precious not to be completed!!! Though i'm guilty for vanishing too >_> anywho, just tell me this will end with a happy ending? I couldn't bear it if it doesn't...i've had to many sad endings recently. Cried the other day watching Glee... And I wanted to know something, anyone reading this can answer, but if I don't see my full review that doesn't mean it's cut off for the author too does it? Will they be able to see the whole review?