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for Muffin

by kiyoai

person Will Treaty
schedule October 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy you are going to finish this story! Maybe you can write another one too. What about squashed muffin, crumbled muffin, toasted muffin, mixed muffin, bruised muffin. Please post the remaining chapters quickly, as we have patiently waited for you to get back to this beautiful story. I will be sad to see it ended but maybe you could think of a sequel.
person Lala
schedule October 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Waiting for an update is killing me. I'm dying to find out what is going to happen next! Though I would love to see this story go on and on and on forever, I am glad we're reaching the end. There's a lot of great stories out there on the interwebz that don't have endings because the writers got caught up in life. I'm super duper happy that this wonderful story will have an end. Without one, I think many a slash fan would go fucking crazy. We love you~<3 (and need our fix)
person Mint
schedule October 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey again! Temperature taste like hot muffin, warm, cool, cold muffin, sweet muffin is good 2! UPDATE ASAP
person r-d
schedule October 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
are you considering writing another story? keeping active on this website? u know ur one of the best writers on here...
person Anon
schedule October 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
sweet muffin is a good
person ryn
schedule October 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG Muffin is so dead. Although he must have been thinking that eventually one way or another he would end up dead because of Asher. Makes sense that Asher would be the one to do it. Or Asher could just chain him to the bed and sex him to death. Oh and some names for chapters: blackberry, strawberry, and orange. Update soon please!
person LoveMuffin
schedule October 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
My friend told me about this story today and I am in love. I feel sorry for Muffin(Mathew) though. Since Asher entered his life his life has been hell(almost: blown up, shot(several times), drowned; and has been beaten and stabbed.) I see why he went to the feds. Especially since Asher has him literally locked in his house.

A possible title: Pecan Muffin or Love Muffin
schedule October 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I don't blame Muffin at all for being angry and wanting revenge. He isn't used to Asher's world, after all, and he was pushed over a line.

I look forward to seeing how this plays out now that he has told the FBI everything he knows.
schedule October 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Whaaaaaaaaat is going on huh?

Just WHO is muffin gonna warn?

What the heck happened with the Elena?

Oh god...

*headspins*

I think I'm thoroughly lost.

- nekoii
schedule October 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This whole time, I had two names for Muffin that I was going back and forth between to be his real name. Matthew was one of them. I feel stupidly excited that that turns out to be his real name :)

I also should have guessed that Asher already knew everything about him, but I didn't. I was definitely surprised.

And the flashbacks in this chapter, especially the details of the accident, we really painful to read. No wonder he's on the verge of going crazy.