rate_review Reviews

Oh, I'm so sad to see the end of this story! I wish there could've been a 'happily ever after' type ending, but it wouldn't have been right for this story, as much as I hate to admit it. hehe And I don't know why you wouldn't try to publish your stories. I've PAID for books that weren't a tenth as good as this one. You do need some help editing, but it's mostly cosmetic editing, if that makes sense--like let's say you're in the market for a house and you find one that's been empty for a while; it needs paint, a new roof maybe, a little bit of dusting... that's all cosmetic, right? The structure is rock solid. So get yourself a really good, honest editor and go for it!

Thank you for this super gorgeous story. I will read and definitely enjoy anything you wanna write in the future. Take care and be happy always! :DD

Sad.
Sad it's over.
Sad for Muffin.
Sad for Asher.

Desperatly hoping for a reunion. Muffin deserves to be happy. With someone.

omg this the best story i ever read and i wanted to ask if you could give me a description of alrick vincenzo muffin and asher because i wanna draw a uber awesome pic of em ^^

This is sort of a sad ending. It hurts that they couldn't end up together. I still want Asher to forgive him. I don't want Muffin to become homeless, but i guess he won't with the money he has. And he do seem able to get around. I would really like to see a prequel to this. It doesn't even have to be long. Just so we can see them happy and not just hopeing they are.

Seriously? Asher really isn't able to forgive Muffin? He can't see his own part in this little shoot down? Muffin's final move didn't matter? Gaah. I also wonder if he'll be able to save his company T^T

I really hope for more on this story. Even if there are months between the updates, I think it would be worth it. But, if you really can't come up with more on the story, I would at the very least want to read another story from you. I love angst :3 And you are good at writing it ^w^

I'd like a sequel if you have the time! The angst is good too :) And don't lose confidence, at least this story has a plot XD

So basically I liked it a lot and I'd love to read more.

;___; I love your angstyness. If you wrote another story, I'm sure a TON of us would read it. WE WOULD FIND YOU.

and honestly... I'm not happy with this ending. It feels slightly off. I can't explain it. However, this story has had a wonderful run, and I'm super happy to have read it to the end :3 I hope you write more stuff. I'll check up on you from time to time, dear. For now, take care.

I won't lie - I'm kinda sad about this ending, where Asher is pissed at him and he has to run. I was so emotionally invested in these characters and their lives and the ending just isn't what I was expecting. I didn't expect rainbows and puppies, but I don't know.

I am glad that he destroyed the evidence at least and that he has a chance at a new life, even though he has to leave Anna and Zack. I also thought it was a nice touch that he wanted his name to stay Matthew.

Oh shit. I think I'm more confused than ever. So Asher has been protecting Muffin this whole time? That I figured. When he finds out what Muffin did, yeah, he's gonna be furious. But I don't think furious enough to kill him.

Is Muffin gonna get to him in time? Was he leaving Asher and Alrick in danger? OMG, I can't wait for the next chapter! Of course, this took me so long to get to, the next chapter will probably be soon. :)

Hi, where are u? I thought u would be updating now once a week on thursday's, what happened? Did you forget us again?
Shame on u for not giving us more Muffin after being away like forever. Pls post more chapters soon, pretty please and I will send u a box a mixed muffins as a BIG THANK U. I know u have a life but u did mention story was complete so can u pls stop punishing us and finish the story. I don't want to hound you or sound rude but this story is one of the best on this site and you should get an award for it. I just can't stand the waiting, it's really killing me. Luv ya and update when you can but I hope it's really soon. PLEASE.