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What a sad ending...
I'm just speaking for myself there but if you're not going to do a sequel this amazing story needs an epilogue. I mean there are unanswered questions like What is going to happen to Asher, Is he going to go to prison? how does he feel about muffin now (come on he can't hate him, right?)or What about Muffin?!He is such a sweet kid that he deserves to have a happy ending!THEY deserve to be happy and together!Hihi!
Again thank you so much for this awesome story!:))))

Hey Mahsa,

Update! and an ending that so feels like the beining of something else. ^_^ I've been following your story for a long time. I can't remember how long, actually. Personally, I write, though I don't post online. I'm crazy on revisions and all that, needing to be perfect. Please have some confidence. You do have a voice and a talent for getting people wanting your characters to succeed, be happy, survive. Even your side characters get fleshed out. So what if a story isn't perfect the first time. It gives you a chance to play and tweak and have fun again.
I'd love to see a sequal about Matthew.
And personally, I wouldn't give up on publishers just yet either.
~river girl

oh, it would be cruel to end it forever. The words I love you weren't uttered and there wasn't enough smex.

This was really good. I like how you ended it - though I would definitely be up for reading a sequel!

I am really going to miss this story but am glad you finished it. Please consider writing a sequel. I have mixed feelings on whether Muffin now Matthew should be with Asher or Vincenzo but am leaning towards Asher. I loved this story so much and hope you continue Muffin's story soon. I am going to have a Muffin withdrawal so please don't keep us waiting too long on a decision.

Hi. I don't have an account on here, thought I am considering it, but I decided to use my ff.net name. Anyways, Thanks for this story. I had a great time reading it. I really hope there is a sequel. The only thing is that for the whole fic I was wishing that Muffin (Mathew) would get with Vicenzo instead. It's like, I liked Asher, and his and Muffin's relationship...but I liked the relationship between Muffin and Vincenzo better. So if the sequel happened to lean in that direction, that'd just make it twice as good. Either way, I'll be watching for it. After all, I can hope, right?

Well. I'd just written a good long review for this story and then of course my internet had to shut down. Why, I don't know but it seems today is not my day. Anyways, to make a long story short: the ending was beautiful. I love how bittersweet it is, in touch with the characters, and the openness is la cerise sur le gateau (the cream on top of the cake is I believe the American expression? cerise is actually cherry but you get my point lol). No really, it worked out perfectly. And, all these inconsistencies you worry about honestly just make the story more poignant and emotionally gripping. And the ending works perfectly within that framework. It's not a neat little bow that ties everything together. It's like the story has so much in it that it can't be fit in a neat little box. No really, this was an amazing, very well written read.

As for the sequel, well, like the other reviewers, I would love to read one. Mainly because I really like happy endings and as much as I can appreciate the greatness of this ending, I can't help but hope we'll get another long, angst and drama filled sequel where eventually Muffin and the others end up at least on the same side of the fence. And even if that doesn't happen, I want to read Mathew's story. Plus it's not like Asher to just stop there... I read his threat as meaning he would search high and low for Muffin and make him pay for his betrayal. And, his relationship with Vicenzo deserves more attention... I myself am partial to Asher and have always been, but I feel Vicenzo adds a lot of depth to Muffin. Hopefully, he'll do the same with Mathew... So yeah, I am definitely in for a sequel and would absolutely read more of your angst and drama any day!

I can't believe it ended. I'm a little bit sad now. I wonder what the sequel would entail but I would be to scared to read it after reading this ending.

I am, however, glad to see yet another author finnish a great story.

It was a great ride, great angst and great muffin!

I am in love. I love this.
xD
I really really hope you post a sequel because, I just, you know, need more... Like an addict xD
I bloody love Muffin - Matthew. I love him and his.. just everything about him aha.

Sorry to inform but I don´t like the ending. I like the story but the ending - noooo. You can do better!
It was too fast, too rushed... I´m feeling like a car drove over me.

Please no sequel with a threesome! these two have enough problems with each other, they don´t need more.
And I don´t believe that Asher would let Muffin go (after the trail etc.) so easily.