rate_review Reviews

I loved your story to pieces, the plot, the characters, the dog. You are a fantastic writer. I sincerely hope you chose to continue this story *nudgenudge* It's 2am, so I'm afraid my reviewing skills are embarrassing, but that was a fantastic hour-a-chapter read. You should feel proud.

pplease please please do a sequal to the story! oh how i beg of you!!!! i am very very grateful that you wrote this story and continued writing it to the end, but i have to admit...i felt quite empty at the end of this story...like i was ripped off or something. And i know i dont have the right to say that becuase this is your story and you should do with it what you please, its just hard when you get so emotionally attached to the characters and the plot and then kaboosh you are left with the main relationship in absolute pieces. D:
But once again thank you so much for writing this story :)

Are you kidding? I've been following this story for ages, wondering why you haven't published it yet. You shouldn't be so self conscious; it's extremely well written for a story on this website. And the ending...it's so anticlimactic, I have to read a sequel! Please, darling, do it for me!

...please make the sequel. I at least am not tired of the drama/angst/whatever and I really, *really* want to read more of Matthew, Asher and Vinzenco's story(ies). I kind of like how you ended the story, how everything *didn't* just magically fall into place but it only makes me more curious as to how the story continues. I've been a silent (but very avid) reader of yours from the beginning and it makes me sad not being able to see how Muffins 'transformation' into Matthew in real life continues. And I for one love love-triangles and I always loved 'Mario', so rock on! (please)

...that was the most dissatisfying ending ever...no kidding...just wow...major plot holes, loved the story..but the ending was rushed...just way too rushed..it had a feeling of: YES FINALLY DONE, screw you muffin....kind of thing? But if you are planning on a sequel I understand..but I think the ending didn't justify the whole story...hmm..I'm dissapointed..but that's just me...yeah^.^ good luck with your life! It's really sad that one of the best stories here on AFF(slash anyway) ended..and in such a way...

Awww I love this story, I would definetly read a sequel especially if muffin/Matthew gets together with Asher ^-^

I'm not gonna lie this ending to Muffin seemed very lacking in climax, action and well everything really since i've followed this AMAZING story since the begining and it's all just ended so quickly in a few paragraphs which seemed to lack effort PLEASE for the love of god write a sequal i feel dead inside knowing that the best story i've ever read in my entire life has just ended and i won't have anything to stalk anymore like i stalked this story
i really really REALLY want to know what asher will do when he and muffin meet again, i want to know what will happen about asher being arrested, will he get out? is his buisness going to go corrupt because of what has happened? has muffin completely fucked ashers life up?
PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE write a sequal, i'll continue to stalk you forever for this beautiful story's sequal.

I'm really confused. I hope you do the sequel because I feel like it's completely unfinished. I mean... does Asher and co remain in prison? Do they have a trial - do they go free without Muffin there as a witness? Do Muffin and Asher meet again? I was really kind of hoping there'd be some kind of sentimental moment between Muffin and Vincenzo...more than a hug, I mean. I was also kind of hoping to find out in more detail what Asher actually DOES. I adore this story but I have to say I'm kind of disappointed that it's abruptly ended...I hope there's a sequel anyway.

Wow, I have to truly say that this is one of the better angst stories in the Original Section, it has the right amount of everything to get someone like me addicted, I hope life treats you well (well enough for a sequel yes? lol) and I can wait to read whatever else you pump out, I ove your writing style and i love this story, hope to see more someday

Kitsuned

:O! NOOOOOOOOOO! Such a sad ending! Why can't Matthew be happy!?! Great story (though I'm not a fan of the ending). You should DEFINITELY continue!