rate_review Reviews

So I don't know if my last review went through because my computer went stupid. So I'll just quickly say it again: Matthew/Vincenzo would be amazing, yes please to a sequel, and the angst is totally great just as long as there is a happy/content ending. So please do a sequel and have Matthew get together with Vincenzo.

HOLY Shit, man! I fucking cried b/c I didn't want it to be over especially with the way things ended with Asher n Muff. I was devastated when you said you may not do a sequel. OMG, you have no idea how wrong you are when you infer that we, the readers, may not want a SEQUEL. It's like, "R U kiddin?" Do you not understand JUST HOW MANY PPL ARE IN LOVE WITH THIS story? Yours is 1 of the most popular on this site! For real, and I KNOW they all WOULD LOVE A SEQUEL. Angst is alright. SO I BEG you to please consider creating a sequel to this AMAZING story. You WOULD win an award if it got nominated or if there was one for stories on this site. PLEASE MAKE A SEQUEL. Consider it. I just am sad that Asher and him didn't reconcile. PLEASE write a sequel. WE ALL DO WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS. Who the hell wouldn't? And, if you don't have time to write one NOW or sometime in the near future, you know that it can happen in the future. Please don't ever give up on making a sequel. You can always just write it later.. even years later since you seem busy now. Just dont give up on the idea. Anyway, your story was one of the best in terms of plot, romance, writing style, you are very talented. Please keep my words in mind b/c they are the god honest truth! !

WHAT! hold up! ahhhh....(ok saraphena breath).... this story as a whole has been a love hate relationship for me and i have to say that it just doesn't feel over i mean does it to you really...please please please think no.
thank you for the wonderful entertainment and i hope(beg) that you write a seq. or a continuation to muffin.
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I was just thinking about this story today and wondering if you were still updating it. I am so happy to see a new chapter. I am eager to catch up with all the characters.

What????!!!!!!! Are you serious? This is the end????!!! Nooooooooo!

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I'm speechless... I think I would be screaming right now if it weren't 1 am and people already complained about my music.
I totally respect you as an author ( I really do, and I don't know if I ever said it before but I think you could sell a great amount of books with your writing, cause it's amazing and it inspires me every time I read it), so I really really really hope you make the sequel -I think I might start praying for it...you know, if I actually prayed in the real world-, cause it left me wanting more... Muffin, I mean, Matthew with Asher. I don't like Muffin with Vicenzo =P, but I think it will be interesting to see that love triangle happen.

Sigh. Man. I need more Muffin =). I can't believe it's over...

I don't know what to say... I love the story, your writing and...everything, if it were a book I would have bought it already.

I hope you find some time to write a sequel =P hehe, please... Okay, I'll stop.

Thank you for everything, see you soon. Bye!

The END???!!! NOOOOOO!!! Aw man, I followed you from the begining! Lol, dude, this story was just amazing! I would totally support you doing ANY kind of sequel to this, so long as I could get a peak at all of their lives well after the shit has hit the fan. *Gurgles with excitement* Jeez I just wanna hug you to death. You're awesome at this, and I'd totally buy your books if you published them. Well, I hope this review helps or at least raises your spirits or just makes you happy, lol. Just know that you did a great job and that you should totally keep doing this.

Thank you for one of the best reads out there on the internet. It's near impossible how emotionally involved I have gotten with this story over time, and sadly, it doesn't really feel like an ending to me at this point. It's hard to imagine that after all the events Asher, Muffin & Co.'s lives are suddenly going separate ways, especially after there is so much left unsaid.

No, I won't beg for the sequel, because you shouldn't write it just because you've been pressured to do it. Nevertheless, I would still love you to death if you did continue this... at least a little... even a oneshot. :)

On the whole: awesome job!

I have a feeling you guys are getting sick of my drama-angst......what? have you not been reading the reviews? how could this story not be continued? and it leads so well into a sequel, like u had been planning one all along...i'm sure with a bit of cleaning up around the edges, this could easily get published mate :)

I don't know whether the end was supposed to make me cry or not, because it made me cry. There's usually a 50-50 chance I'll end up crying at the sad ending of an angst story, but I didn't really think this would have made me. However I always remind myself that stories don't exactly end happily-ever-after, or are always going to be "sunshine, lollipops, rainbows, and everything that's wonderful".

Despite Muffin (or Matthew now) almost leaving everything behind him, I was happy for him that he decided to rebuild a new life ontop of what he has sort of learnt out of all of this. I guess in his gut he'll always feel the pain of his traumatic past, and guilt of his betrayal. Right now, where Matthew is leaving for is boggling my mind. The whole situation makes me want to break into another song reference... "'cause I'm leaving on a jet plane / don't know when I'll be back again".

I find it a shame you decided to end it now, but it wasn't disappointing whatsoever. I don't want to pressure you into writing a sequel but I'm sure you'll a lot of us on the edge of our seats hoping you will.

Goodbye for now, and I also wish you the best.

I have read this story and I have to say it was one of the best ones I have read on AFF. The story was really good and very well told. There were surprises and the characters were very developed and original. I hope you continue to write because you truly have a talent for it. If this is the end of this story, then what a good ending it was. You left it open and the reader can come up with their own conclusion. If you do indeed do a sequel that would be great also. Personally, I do hope you continue Matthew's story but I would also look forward to reading your other works. Congratulations on finishing this story. And good luck in the future!
P.S. If you really want to be a writer, don't give up on it because you do have a talent for it. This made for an excellent draft. A lot better than some of the books I've actually bought.