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January 3, 2020 at 12:00 AM
I'm just here, remembering old times lol
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December 10, 2019 at 12:00 AM
This is absolutely my favorite story on this website, I love the rewrites so much I'm just so sad that it hasn't been updated in quite a while so I'm hoping that everything is going well in your life Mahsa and I so hope you get back into writing Matthew and the rewrites for Muffin we miss you ðŸ˜
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September 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Are you ever going to continue the re-write of the story? it looks so promising. I hope you'll come back to work and update it.
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April 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I missed your story so much! And I really liked the way you re-wrote the first two chapters!! It's like I get to experience the whole story again from a more mature and calculated point of view, since obviously your tastes and style had changed over the years. I hope to read more from you soon, and it would be aeesome if you had some site\profile that is being updated from a time to time. Even if you can't find the time to post new chapters, at least we'll know you're still alive. I think it would also help you to know how much people love your story and give you motivation! I only started re-reading and I'm in the fourth chapter, I really hope you will continue your project and re-write the rest of the story, because it came out totally awesome!!
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October 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I just reread Muffin and Matthew since I saw you edited Muffin in July. I love your story and all the characters. I had a question. It seems like there's a part missing between Chap 2(Blueberry) and Chap 3(Chocolate chip). In Chap three when Muffin sitting in the diner talking to Anna he starts referring to the first time Asher was in the diner and how Asher threw Muffin against the wall and choked him in the back of a Chinese restaurant. This scene wasn't in Chap 2. This is one of my favorite stories on AFF. Thank you for sharing it with us.
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August 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed Muffin and I just noticed you started editing Muffin, that's great! Will we be seeing anything for Matthew anytime soon?
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July 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Loved this story. Read it twice. I would love to see Matthew updated. Stay classy my friend
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April 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Please don't use the term "erect rod" again.
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May 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Haha, you write funny. And that's pretty rare.
This is probably one of the best stories I've ever read, and I don't say that a lot. Great job!
This is probably one of the best stories I've ever read, and I don't say that a lot. Great job!
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May 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I adored this story.
Loved the characters.
Muffin was too yummy and sassy. Would have
Loved to see this 2 character continue on their story
With a happy ever after to the best of their life's circumstance.
In the second book I was not too happy with the different ways the
Author was trying to direct muffin to another relationship.... It did not hold my attention as much as
Ash and muffins relationship did.
This is book 1 is finish , but book 2 is not , so I'm left very disappointed.
But other wise this was an awesome read.
Loved the characters.
Muffin was too yummy and sassy. Would have
Loved to see this 2 character continue on their story
With a happy ever after to the best of their life's circumstance.
In the second book I was not too happy with the different ways the
Author was trying to direct muffin to another relationship.... It did not hold my attention as much as
Ash and muffins relationship did.
This is book 1 is finish , but book 2 is not , so I'm left very disappointed.
But other wise this was an awesome read.