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for Beyond This Illusion

by Kurani

schedule September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was both wonderful and sad at the same time. I'm glad Jay came out and told Mina the truth about loving her. Truely showing she cared for her she gave the the option to leave. What sadens me is, Jay can never turn Mina, so eventually Mina will die and that's so sad an depressing as hell but hey it's life. Maybe there's away around it? I'm going on to the next chapter.
schedule September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Jay's turning her! I wish it was for different reasons, but hey I'll take what I can get. you did well with the fight scene in this chapter. I had a feeling Jay wasn't going to be able to hide her true feelings for Mina. I'm excited about the next chapter. Add when you can.
schedule August 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Bravo, I'm officealy intrested in where this is going. not only well written but PLOT! actual plot. Really hopeing you update this soon

Lycanthrope
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schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another chapter! I'm so glad Mina and Jiresue became a couple at last. I can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Noooooooooo! Noooooooooo! Don't kill Mina!

I have to say I'm really enjoying this story it's very well written and extremely entertaining. Please continue and add when you can.

It's good to see that Jay (I'm gonna call her Jay because I can't remember how to spell her name) isn't a complete bitch and has a human side. Maybe Mina will squash the idea of escaping and love Jay in return, that's if Jay doesn't kill Mina that is. I'm almost certain she won't. Love is a powerful thing and if she does the story will be over and we can't have that.
schedule February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well written, and an entertaining read ^_^ Please continue it.