rate_review Reviews

WOWOWOWOWOWOW!!!!!!!!!!!!

Love the beast one....Wish I could do that! I also Like the name of the Dog, Baxter. Funny my best friends last name is Baxter!!! Great writing!

You're very good at description. :) I've enjoyed this so far, especially this second chapter.

Personally, I'd suggest doing a bit of a range of things before revisiting the subjects you've already covered. D/s is good, especially lesbian D/s - and if you go for that, I'd love to see use of a Feeldoe (basically a strapless strap-on) in a story. =) But of course, don't write anything you're too uncomfortable with. I look forward to the next chapter.

~Rose

Swell wherecan I find a DOG like that??? Ceilia

I'm enjoying this very much! I loved the first chapter and the second was quiet nice as well. You're a good writer and I hope you post more!! As for what I would like to see... BDSM is always good, teacher/student, Noncon or dubious con is a personal fetish, and maybe if you're feeling a little extreme, some cutting. Not anything mutilating or gore porn type stuff, just a little bit of shallow cutting and minor blood play... Just some thoughts. :-) I'll definitely be checking for updates!!

Wow. Great stuff!
You are wonderful at description and, well, general hotness!
I cannot wait for another forbidden story! But for now, this one is going on my recommended reading list!
Awesome job!
XOXO