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January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey there!
Very hot writing! Great Job!
I just want to make one small suggestion, when you format your chapters it would be
REALLY helpful for the reader if you broke up the paragraphs a little better, especially
between dialogue lines.
But other than that, keep writing, you have a lot of potential!
XOXO
Very hot writing! Great Job!
I just want to make one small suggestion, when you format your chapters it would be
REALLY helpful for the reader if you broke up the paragraphs a little better, especially
between dialogue lines.
But other than that, keep writing, you have a lot of potential!
XOXO