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Ok, so I read this (what feels like) a looooong time ago...but I never even got through all the chapters were up. I can't remember why-it wasn't that I hated it, I actually thought it was very good. So when I stumbled across it a couple days ago, I was ecstatic. It was just as good as I remembered it!!! I was terrified when I saw in your profile that it was 100% done and got to the end just a few moments ago...you said in your author's note at the bottom that there was more to come...I hope that this is true!!! I really can't wait to read more. :) So please update at some point in time!!!

dammit I wondered what happen to you but hell....been having issues. Then I didn't know if I should email you or not >_< I hate to bug writers and god I have issues with...many things and what's ok or not.

But glad things are better and that you updated. Wow this chapter was....wow...everything just crashed all into one alright! I wasn't expecting this at all.

Still one of my favorite original stories on this site next to scribes<3

HOLY SHIT, AN UPDATE. HOLY FUCKING MOTHER OF GOD FUCJKKksdksjdsiosd, the chapter.
Yeahhhhh, I missed this.

OMFG, the shit finally hit the fan!!!! I was hoping the inevitable would never happen. God, what a lousy time for Felicity to walk in! After all the times Phoenix and Jacob have done it in the house with Felicity there, she picked THAT time to barge into Jacob's room! Bad timing! My heart goes out to her. I can't imagine the betrayal she's feeling; from both Phoenix and Jacob.

I loved the beginning of the chapter where Jacob was given all his gifts. The glass dildo reminded me of a gift I bought my best friend when not long after we graduated college. I went to The Pink Pussycat (it's probably gone now) in the Village (in NYC). I bought her a dildo with that rabbit thingie attached. Anyway we were at a restaurant with her b/f and my b/f and she opened it up, put it on the table and turned it on. That thingie jumped up and down and went from one end of the table to the other. I was praying I'd be swallowed up by the floor, but no such luck. The guys were cracking up and the whole restaurant was watching in horror at this dildo coming to life! OMG, needless to say, she love her gift. hahah

Anyway....I digress; I loved the part where Jacob was thinking about Tori's mom; how he was never taught proper etiquette of conversing with a blow up doll that happens to be your friend's mother. That was hysterical!!!!!

I CANNOT wait for the next chapter and I hope you don't make us wait another 5 or 6 mos!!!!!! Please, pretty please!!!! Dandruff is one of my all time favorite stories!!!!

Wow, I just spent the last few days reading the whole story, seriously, I couldn't stop. I just love the characters and the plot...well, everything. I usually don't like third person stories, but yours it's just so well written and it made me know how Jacob felt, thought, and sometimes Phoenix too. So it was cool.
Something weird happened to me, there is a chapter in which Jacob looks at his clock and he said it was 1:23AM, and exactly at that moment I looked at my watched and guess what? it was 1:23AM too =O Spooky hahaha, sorry, I had to tell you =P.
Anyway, ahhhh! I'm so into the story I can't wait to see how everything works out. Poor Felicity, but Phoenix and Jacob should be together, they're just so much fun.

Oh my God an update !!! YAYYYYYY !! And what a dramatic chapter...Poor,poor Jacob.He never gets a moment of calm really.And that's what make this story such a rollecastar ! Felicity knows.WOW.Jacob lives with Pilot.WOW.MORE !!!!

Great story... poor jacob... hope everything does work out for him... update soon

*update, update* Wahah sorry I'm expecting an update very very soon! I loved the last update! just wanted to let you know againXD...I wrote another message but it seems they cut that one in halve O.O anyways loooooved the last update! So far my favorite! and I love the fact that Phoenix didn't even deny the fact that he likes Jacob <3 thank you! You made my day,yeaarrr, lifeeee :3 - and yes, I've read the chapter againXD (in case you were wondering)

OMG why is this stupid thing cutting my messages in half?!?!!??! dammit! I was saying in my last update: that I loved this update very much! and I'm glad you updated! and that you didn't leave this story or anything! I hope you will solve all your conflicts and then continue writing with a peaceful mind <3 anyways thank you ooh osososososos much for the last update! I really loved the fact that Phoenix didn't deny his feelings for Jacob...or...damn....was this in my other message tooo? or was this part cut in half?XD thank you!!!! hope you'll update very very soon! and I'm glad you'll finish this story first and then continue on Blood Rave <3 Though I love Blood Rave too...but this I love more! Oh btw I was wondering,,when this story is completed...can you make a few one-shots once in awhile? on how they are living atm etc.?XD Because I don't want to say goodbye to the characters if that time comes. I'm certain I will re-read this story all over again once it's finished but stillxD I want moreeeXD

I love this. You are such an amazing writer. I'm so obsessed at the moment. Phoenix obviously has issues but I love him to death. Phoenix and Jacob are definitely my favorite couple no matter how screwed up their.... relationship is. I can't wait to read more. Happy ending PLEASHE. (if it's possible lol)