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January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story. It's very well written, and your characters are both extremely engaging. I mean, even though they're both clearly jerk, each in their own way. (Actually that makes them even better.) The whole situation is funny as hell and fraught with further awkward possibilities.
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January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That last line had me cackling. Good one.
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January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg. i love it. this story is totally awesome. i cant wait to read more. update soon please.
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January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2
Man! I love the way these two boys fight!!!!
They're both perfectly awful to each other!
“Am I going to have to call you ‘daddy’?” HA!
Great conversation between him and his wife!!!
He's sneaky and she's a sharpy!!!
I really hope Jacob's not talking about her boobs!!!!! HA!
Love all the descriptions both gross and fantastic!!
(Love the way Phoenix is fooling himself!!!) Love the UST!!!!
Thanks,
R
Man! I love the way these two boys fight!!!!
They're both perfectly awful to each other!
“Am I going to have to call you ‘daddy’?” HA!
Great conversation between him and his wife!!!
He's sneaky and she's a sharpy!!!
I really hope Jacob's not talking about her boobs!!!!! HA!
Love all the descriptions both gross and fantastic!!
(Love the way Phoenix is fooling himself!!!) Love the UST!!!!
Thanks,
R
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January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is great, i can't believe he got caught in that....position and isn't in the least embarrassed about it!
Hope you get to update soon!
Hope you get to update soon!
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January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was funny
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January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very funny. I really like this story. I hope you will continue it. If you don't, you will not receive the customary basket of cookies. lol. just kidding.
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January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
First chapter and I'm already hooked.
I hope you are quick to update because I enjoy the premise for the plot very much, and the writing is also good.
So Phoenix is into the kinky stuff. I personally believe that kinky characters are the best kinds of characters to have in a story. ^_^
Can't wait to see how Phoenix's wife handles this new situation with Jacob.
(oh, and poor Kyle - lol - thanks for that last laugh; I was wondering what happened to him)
I hope you are quick to update because I enjoy the premise for the plot very much, and the writing is also good.
So Phoenix is into the kinky stuff. I personally believe that kinky characters are the best kinds of characters to have in a story. ^_^
Can't wait to see how Phoenix's wife handles this new situation with Jacob.
(oh, and poor Kyle - lol - thanks for that last laugh; I was wondering what happened to him)
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January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!
This story is so fun!!! Love Jacob!! Love Phoenix!
Love the situation!! Love the set up!!! And that poor
kid is still ties to his desk!!! HA!!
What was he thinking!!!!!
Now the janitor is going to want to move in with him!!! HA!
Thanks a ton!!!
R
This story is so fun!!! Love Jacob!! Love Phoenix!
Love the situation!! Love the set up!!! And that poor
kid is still ties to his desk!!! HA!!
What was he thinking!!!!!
Now the janitor is going to want to move in with him!!! HA!
Thanks a ton!!!
R