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January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh.
My.
God.
Kumbaya?!?!
My eyes hurt from the tears! I laughed so damn much at that I swear I woke up the neighbours! THis is so insane... and so damn hot! I love the hate/hate-thing they got going! Allthough, I think a certain pool-boy will be fired very soon.. ;o)
My.
God.
Kumbaya?!?!
My eyes hurt from the tears! I laughed so damn much at that I swear I woke up the neighbours! THis is so insane... and so damn hot! I love the hate/hate-thing they got going! Allthough, I think a certain pool-boy will be fired very soon.. ;o)
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January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am absolutely in love with this story. Your writing is excellent.
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January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
... this is fucking amazing. Seriously? Amazing.
I absolutely love all of the characters. Jacob cracks me up, the whole scene with him and Felicity being drunk... And Phoenix's response... I just love it. It's so fucking funny. ;.; I had to pause and laugh a few times before continuing. Not only is the plot good, but your skills at forming sentences is sweet. It flows so good. I love you already.
I hope you update soon. Marry me.
I absolutely love all of the characters. Jacob cracks me up, the whole scene with him and Felicity being drunk... And Phoenix's response... I just love it. It's so fucking funny. ;.; I had to pause and laugh a few times before continuing. Not only is the plot good, but your skills at forming sentences is sweet. It flows so good. I love you already.
I hope you update soon. Marry me.
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January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3
Holy Crap this is funny!!!
Love the kid!!! Love the (in denial) Phoenix!!!
Great dinner conversation!!! Love his wife!
Phoenix would have a pool boy who looked liked that!!!
Can't wait!!!!
Thanks,
R
Holy Crap this is funny!!!
Love the kid!!! Love the (in denial) Phoenix!!!
Great dinner conversation!!! Love his wife!
Phoenix would have a pool boy who looked liked that!!!
Can't wait!!!!
Thanks,
R
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January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hehe. that was so great. i just love jacob to death. and phoenix is totally awesome. i love seeing those two interact. i wonder if phoenix is going to get jealous of the pool boy. i cant imagine he'll be imployed long... lol. great chapter. i love it. i cant wait to read more. update soon please.
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January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The sexy pool boy...the stories one could write. I can't wait to read the one you write. Felicity turned out to be cooler than I gave her credit for.
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January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*grin* nice story, I really like it, and the last line of chap. two was GOOOOOLD! ;o)
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January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"Are those real?"
That cracked me up. I love that you are pacing this story. They aren't already in bed together, which is great. And you gave Felicity a personality and her marriage a three-dimension.
I am so enjoying this!
That cracked me up. I love that you are pacing this story. They aren't already in bed together, which is great. And you gave Felicity a personality and her marriage a three-dimension.
I am so enjoying this!
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January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love the interaction between P. and J.
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January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I wonder how Felicity is going to handle that question? ^_^
And I also wonder what the relationship between her and Jacob is going to be like. Are they going to get along, or be pains in each other's backsides?
I'm happy that you're taking the Phoenix/Jacob pairing slow. It's no fun (and unrealistic) if one minute they can't stand each other, then in the next paragraph they're going at it like dogs in heat. So thanks for starting the relationship out slowly and building it up. It always feels better that way.
And I also wonder what the relationship between her and Jacob is going to be like. Are they going to get along, or be pains in each other's backsides?
I'm happy that you're taking the Phoenix/Jacob pairing slow. It's no fun (and unrealistic) if one minute they can't stand each other, then in the next paragraph they're going at it like dogs in heat. So thanks for starting the relationship out slowly and building it up. It always feels better that way.