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please continue!!!!!!

I... I think I'm dreaming? A new chapter?! Gotta love the drama, much love to you! (Take it easy with life and its busyness.)

26 - You have no idea the glee I experienced when I saw that this got an update. I was fucking ecstatic. No one cares if your writing style changed. I love this way too much to even think of giving a fuck. (I also didn't notice) But holy fuck I'm so happy. And I laughed at the end of the chapter. I'll decide later if that means I'm a terrible person.

More dandruff just makes me need more dandruff. I need it bad.

Ohhhh man. I think I nearly flipped with joy when I saw the new update. I'm totally still a die hard fan for your story. XD

Also, I'd like to point out that I feel SO bad for Russel. Poor guy. Keep up the fantastic work.

I'm still interested:) Although I have to admit that I was really surprised to see that you had updated. I don't think you're messing it up. It sounds like your writing is still the same to me. Really good chapter!It was full of drama and heart ache. I'm really not sure how this story is going to end though. Usually I have an idea, but with Jacob and Phoenix I have no idea. Will they end up together? Will they end up alone? I don't know. I want Jacob and Phoenix to be together, despite Phoenix being fucked up. Jacob just loves Phoenix so much. It sends an ache in my chest. I know that feeling:) Though thankfully the feelings are returned and he isn't fucked up like Phoenix. Hopefully, Jacob will end up with someone though and hopefully he will be truly happy. I wonder what his sister is going to do when she finds out that Jacob is the 'home-wrecking slut'. She'll have to find out eventually. Very good chapter. I look forward to reading more.

ohhhh the pregnancy just added the cherry upon this dramatic cake mannnn

keep up the good work and update soon pleasee!
-el

Words aren't enough to let you know how much I love this new chapter and how much I've missed this story. It's like a drug that I always crave for and I'm ecstatic to see you've updated.

I love how this story make me feel that the world isn't always a happy place to live in and how the characters don't seem to be like they've stepped out of a fairy tale book. Everything is so realistic where some lives are fucked up and only a few maintain the code of sanity, which is exactly what I ultimately love about this story.

I would love to see Phoenix rip off his mask and show a little humanity though, show how he really feels for Jacob. I wonder if Jacob is part of the plan when he moves to New York.

I so feel for Russel, I hope he'll find it in his heart to forgive Jacob but then again, I really would love to see where you take this story.

Pilot's so cool, I love him already. Unless there will be a twist somewhere in the storyline where he'll end up being the devil's advocate. Who knows. This story is full of surprises, that's why it's awesome in every way.

And Jacob, Jacob, Jacob. It's now time to grow up, honey. Time to act like an adult that you are now.

OMG! A new chapter!!! Hallelujah!! WTF? Felicity's pregnant?... OH Crap!
I know this may sound somewhat twisted but I really like Jacob with Phoenix... Perhaps 2 "wrongs" can make it right.

Glad to see an update!! Can't wait to see how this all ends. :)

I am so glad you upadted. It is just so selfish from me to demand updates, but I am really gratefull, that you did. Your style didn t change much, maybe it s just your inner self and life, which really changed and make you feel different about everything. I love this story. It contains that part, when reader can t tell, how it will end, like in real life, because your characters are quite originally developed. Your dialouges are natural and funny, and sometimes there is just this unexpectedness. And I can t wait what will happen, so we are back to demanding audience,"me". Selfishly said: "I hope you will have more free time for friends, fun,... and writing of course." Thanks. (sorry for my English)