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for Dandruff

by Munez

person wynja
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh. I'm so sorry about missing last weeks update. Apparently. Now I feel guilty... *grin* Oh, this is just getting better and better! Can't wait for next weeks update! Which I hope I won't miss... ;o)
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*giggles fanatically* OMG that was amazing!!! XD Just wow, Jacob is so in denial and Pheonix is just so naughty it makes me all flustered too! lol VERY awesome update, mate, can't wait till the next!!!!!! But I will... cuz I'm a good yaoi fangirl XDDD
person Jayde Alyxandre
schedule February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You are so freaking awesome. I love this story. It never never fails to give me the giggles. Another great chapter. Thanks for the update.
person CassLX
schedule February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story. Both Phoenix and Jacob are bastards, but they're adorable, funny, sexy bastards. Their interactions really make the story.
person Rosei
schedule February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Six moved along quite well and thankfully had an
R rated moment!!!

Anything that gets those two arguing, in a bed no less,
is alright by me!!!! Love Phoenix's frustration, he gets
so out of control that it's so much fun to read!!!

Had Jacob been dressed decently or indecently at the time the
bed clothes were ripped from him, I don't think Phoenix would
have been able to contain his overpowering lust for the kid!

(Lucky for the kid, unlucky for the reading public!)

Thanks,
R

person wynja
schedule February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeah... damn life... Gay porn should ALWAYS come first! *lol* This story is so much fun! Loved the hotness... EVIL man! *grin*
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked Juanita's juvie line and the crotchless prank was good.
person Rosei
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like how you write the relationships and dialog
that Jacob has with the ladies in the story, very fun.

The arguments with Phoenix are spot on!! How they love
to rip each other up!!!! (Get a room!)

Thanks,
R
person wynja
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"and he probably curb-stomped puppies in his spare time" *LOL!* Ahhh... poor missunderstood lawer... *grin* I'm loving this...
person Jayde Alyxandre
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol. Jacobs gonna get it now. Great chapter. Thanks for the update.