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for Dandruff

by Munez

person naviarex
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was fantastically hot. Well I'll admit I'm biased... a bit of BDSM never hurt me. Ha ha!
The sentimental bit of "So you would want me to be your boyfriend?" had me going awwwwwww. Small doses go a long way. Thanks for the update!
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YOU SAID YOU WERE BAD AT SMUT YOU LIAR!
XD
So Jacob's gonna go to the private school?
Hehehehehe, poor Big Bird,
He's going to be paying for nothing XD
schedule March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
O_O... *trails after Jacob and hops into backseat, fuzzy handcuffs and video camera in hand* This is gonna be SO internet worthy!!!... *goes quiet at Jacob's answering gaze*

lmao I'm so EXCITED!!!!!! Update soon? Pretty please? Pretty PRETTY PLEASE??? XD I'm so morbid... getting all hott-n-bothered by the idea of Phoenix punishing Jacob.. hehehe
person naviarex
schedule March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The suspense is killing me! It as much the impending S&M as is the situation with Felicity? How is that going to turn out? I can't see them in a threesome... but then Phoenix loves her hmmmmmmm.... :)
person kylee
schedule March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love love love it! I laughed until my eyes were watering. I was hoping Phoenix would sweet talk the principal into giving Jacob one more chance. I think Jacob would do well with a little punishment.
person jazz
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that chapter was really funny :D
person kiix
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hoooo, that was evil. Soup spoon? I don't get it. Silver spoon...okay. Soup? It's just beyond my grasp this morning.
person Rosei
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10 "Soup Spoon"

I don't know, the title kind of fit, ('cause this kid's
gonna get his hide tanned!)

God you write some mean smarting dialog!!! LOVE IT!!!!!

Thanks,
R
person tdorian
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God I can't even pretend I was working...Ok, reading this at work was bad idea.Giggling stupidly not the best idea either and spitting tea all over the desk even worse ! LOL But it is so good.Totally hilarious ! Aida
person wynja
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my. I'm actually a bit scared for Jacob now.... *grin* I love being scared! ;o)I thought he would step SLIGHTLY out of line, but THIS... oh, lord... I don't want to be in his shoes, but I would love to watch... *evil grin*