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for Dandruff

by Munez

person jules
schedule April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Juhuu,
another great chapter!I like your story a lot,jacob and phoenix are hilarious as hell...
The sexscene was fantastic and ultra hot!It was interesting to read more about phoenix past
and his family.So he can`t stand his younger brother pilot and his sister is a slut,i hope they appear soon!
Jacob gives his surrounding so much trouble,but that`s fine with me,it´s funny to read and phoenix can punish
him anytime the way he does:..:)
But i feel a little bit sorry for felicity,she`s really nice and not the bitch i hope she would be.
Can`t wait to read more!!!
Greetings, jules
person tdorian
schedule April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hate you ? Even in this short chapter you managed to give a good laugh ! MORE
schedule April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww, poor conflicted Jacob (want to cuddle him)As always, a great chapter, and doesn't need kinky-sex to be a good update, just Phoenix's teasing was obscenely hot. Anyways, can't wait for more.
schedule March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome! I love just how irredeemable Jacob is, just makes
him so perfect to be disciplined by the all-to-willing Phoenix. Also, EXCELLENT
job on making Brett just seem like a complete douche, even before he started thinking
of Jacob as a slut, like saying he was in an "Alternative Rock Band" just set off
my douche-sensors (which work very well) Keep up the good work, and I so look forward
to reading more of this excellent story. You have a devoted fan in me! (Also, Jacob is
really cute, despite his brattiness)
person Perona
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow hot chapter. I know I thoroughly enjoyed Jacob's punishment. I still feel bad for Phoenix's wife, she seems like a genuinely nice person, I'm really curious how her relationship with Phoenix (and Jacob) progresses as those two get *ahem* closer.
person kylee
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter. Very hot sex scenes. I can bet Phoenix and Jacob will be addicted to each other before long. I feel sorry for poor Jacob between being kicked out of school and trying to figure out Phoenix, he has his hands full. I love the craziness of their relationship. I can't wait to read more.
person tdorian
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh my God that was so hot, even if Phoenix is a realy psycho ! lol I couldn't help but laugh like crazy when he had his dick bitten ! eh eh !! Really you have some wicked ideas and wonderful dialogs.Great chapter.
person midnighteyes
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love seeing an update.. This is one of my favorite ones.. Thanks for sharing!!!
person JT.
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahaha. Oh, fuck. Phoenix is so messed up. Yessssss. I l o v e it! Seriously, he's so creepy-scary. It's beautiful. The best thing ever would be Jacob trying to awkwardly seduce crazy Phoenix. God, that would just be great. Anyway, I really want more! Update sooooon.
person wynja
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
“This is different!” not the best defence of honour there ever was.
That line made my day. I still have the biggest grin on my face... YAAAY for smexy chapter, by the way, it was SO hot!

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