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Awww Does Jacob get a reward for following the rules? *wink wink*

Good luck on finals!

I thought I would quote my favourite lines but in the end it I would have ended putting all the chapter !! It's hialrious really ! One of teh funniest thing I've read since a long time.There are gags evrywhere and your dialogs with the teens in the end made me laugh so hard my ribs hurt.seriously,YOU ROCK.

Another awesome chapter, smelling a pit of a foreshadowing with the "goth kid." You still inspire me, wish I could write as well as you, but anyhows. I suddenly want to hug you your last statement about loathing Twilight (I practically screamed "THANK GOD, I'M NOT THE ONLY ONE!") Anyways, great chapter, and looking forward to more. Also, I understand about the getting ready for finals (mine are comin' up too.) It's a bitch.

I LOVED IT.
Have I told you,
Mu-chan,
That you are my hero?
I mean,
damn,
It was fuckin' funny X3

Holy damn, man. I'll be honest, I wasn't sure I was going to like this story but started reading it on a whim... Now I'm fucking in love with you and would willingly be your bitch! My God. I really like your style and sense of humor and the smut really had me going. You do a really good job and I just hope that you know it. I've been reading this all day, drawing it out to savor it. Wow I sound ridiculous. Truth though. It's three in the morning now and here I still am about to go to your profile to see if I can read anything else of yours.

Your characters are amoral assholes save Felicity and Danica, but I love it. Morals get in the way of smut and as they eventually form they build closer bonds and make character growth! It's amazing! I didn't think I'd find someone writing this way around. I got my computer back after two years a couple months ago and this is honestly the best story I've read since.

Phoenix is hot and crazy and I love it by the way. I wouldn't mind being roughed up by someone like him. Then there's Jacob...Lord is He a little bitch! It's adorable and Perfect and I love the way you're working out their disjointed and somewhat ludicrous relationship. I'll be checking this story regularly.

Thank you very much, truely from the supposed bottom of my sexdrive for writing this story.

-Renny

*lol* okay, I WON'T hate you... much... *lowers rifle* ;o) Aw, I'm really starting to like Felicity, which is REALLY a bad thing! If she had been a bitch, I could so easily 'forgive' the adultery, but now my poor, muddled mind fells really sorry for her, so I'm all "I want them to do it cause it's hot!"/"No! It's wrong towards her"/"But hot!"/"Wrong!"/"Hot!" AAARRRRGGHH!!! Did you absolutely HAVE to make me start to CARE about the characters?! ;o) Ah, well... it's too late now...

You've got some of the best imagery: snickering Pillsbury Dough boy?! It is so hard to predict how this might end. All the characters might be flawed by you wrote all of them to be likable... So it's hard to tell who'll get screwed. Heh! But that's what makes it good!

Wow! Twisted but fabulous... I like it! I hope Felicity doesn't find out...

Hilarious chapter! The Maury Povich reference had me cracking up. Poor Jacob is like putty in Phoenix's hands. And Phoenix is so diabolical. I am eager for the next chapter and more sex!