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by Munez

person wynja
schedule April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I HOPE it's gonna be a long weekend! With lots, and lots of fun, healthy things for the two to do! Like... walks... scrabble... movie-night... err... god, it's a good thing it's YOU writing this story and not me! -lol- Can't wait for more, and very curious about the valentines-card! The 'rhyme' still makes me giggle...
schedule April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Got linked to this sotry by a friend with the message "You'll love it! There's a character that totally reminds me of you!"
And woah, I'm sure glad she sent this along to me.
I absolutely LOVE this fic. Your sex scenes are way hot.
person tdorian
schedule April 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I so want to know wo is the artist who wrote this wonderful poem ! LOL Everytime I see an update for this tory I have this hudge grin that hurts my cheeks when I've finished reading.IT'S SO GOOD !!!
schedule April 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
person Jules
schedule April 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Juhuu,
nice poem...giggle.
I bet it`s from that creepy Russell dude...
Jacob`s way to tame in the last chapter, i love it when he gives Phoenix hell.The sex was very hot,can`t
wait to read what else will happen on this weekend!!!
But will they ever fall in love with each other?I hope so...:).
Greetings, Jules
person katzies
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awsome story, I love it when I find a good story!
person kiyoai
schedule April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes! I'm on fire today, just finding one good story after another! I knew from the first chapter that I was going to love this story; something about the brat aspect really reels me in, I guess. I don't doubt that there is a mental illness out there somewhere, made just for me, but until I find it and receive proper medication I'm going to overindulge on brattiness. Such as Jacob's. And ugh if that boy isn't nummy! I just want to gobble him all up. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter... with sick, sadistic hopes of Phoenix showing Jacob just how owned he is.
person anon
schedule April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
im glad you stuck to your deadline but damn this story is addicting. no one makes confident arrogant sexy dominants anymore :( and i have been reading your recommendations too! if you have anymore to hold me over while i wait, do post them! :(
person wynja
schedule April 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*lol* loving his new... errr... friends? Felt a bit evil as I snickered at the hot sauce in the soup, but what the hell, Jacob DESERVED it, he really did... Now I feel sorry for him though, being sexually frustrated can be DANGEROUS! Well... a bit... Right? Better do something to help with that... ;o)
schedule April 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yaay! New chapters! I'm glad someone can make deadlines. I sure as hell can't. I don't even have my first story up here because I procrastinate so much.
It's good to see Jacob making friends (Kind of) and getting rid of useless old (but admittedly hot) trash.
However, I must say that there was a disturbing lack of Phoenix in this chapter. I really enjoyed it though! Can't wait for the next!
-Renny