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Yaaay! Update! Yes, please add me to the update-list, just in case: wynja_bane@hotmail.com
THis chapter was great... a little sad, a lot of fun... I loved that the secreat admirer is back... okay so he draws lousy, and his poetic qualities leaves something to be desired, but he at least has a a good penmanship! That counts for something, right!?
Awww... He relaized he's fallen for the guy... And that litte girl! *lol* Can't wait to read more, so I hope everything lets up at school (yeah, right...)

Poor Jacob... doing it all for the iPhone. Miranda sounds a little whacked

Hilarious chapter. It had the best of everything. Sex with Phoenix, a cute little girl grabbing Jacob's ass and explicit stic figure sex from "the secret admirer" Jacob is truly in demand right now. I am glad that you will be keeping Dandruff going for a while. It is a great story and I don't want it to end. I love to see Phoenix and Jacob taunt each other, even if Phoenix doesn't play fair.

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God I was so excited when I saw that you'd updated again.
You're officially my favorite author ever.
I love this story and everything about it. Especially after that thought Jacob had while walking down the sidewalk. T__T
Can't wait for more. <3

Hi again! This was a really good chapter! I'm really excited to see who the secret admirer is. They have an awesome sense of humor. I enjoyed the blow job scene a lot too. Poor Jacob really just can't help but get himself in over his head, can he? Miranda and her mother are both adaorable and another thing I'm excited for is meeting her older brother. Yay! Exams are tough as hell and insomnia's always around when you least want it to be. I hope things get better for you soon and I'd love to be notified of updates! That's a really cool idea. My primary e-mail address is Renny2012@gmail.com

Thanks for another great chapter!
-Renny

juhuu,
5 dollars?that was really cruel...:)
Pöhh, I think it`s time for someone new in Jacobs life, maybe a certain secret admirer?
And the little girl has a brother the same age as Jacob?Omg the possibilitys...
Good luck with your examens, Jules

Hm...a secret admirer and a brother to the little girl...I'm guessing they're the same person. And what about the guy Jacob was eyeing on the first day of class? I like that you're dropping hints here and there and hopefully they'll all come together.

I don't mind that you're keeping the progress between Pheonix/Jacob slow, actually I prefer it this way. A new guy for Jacob will be interesting. Not a guy like Brett, but someone that can actually pose a challenge to Pheonix.

Where did you go? *Sad face* I remembered reading that you update every monday (Or do your best to) so every sunday-tuesday I habitually check this story because I'm always excited to see what'll come next, but you haven't been updating. The past three weeks or so I've come to check and I just see the same page. I'm actually going to reread the whole story now. I'm sure it was your work or school just getting too hectic and you had other things to do, but I just wanted to let you know that there are people that miss you out here in internet land and hope to see you soon. Hope all is well!

-Renny

A whole weekend without Felicity? Oh yes. Please give us every single detail. Phoenix and Jacob are so good together. Chasing each other through the backyard. Great love scenes as always. I loved how Phoenix told Jacob how hot he was. It would be interesting if Phoenix gets a little competition from whoever is writing love letters to Jacob. Love Love Love it!

Hiya. It's me again. Reading everything you touch since two weeks ago.
This had a Very nice amount of Phoenix. Mm... That was a really good sex scene to be honest. I thought the leash was a nice touch.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter too. I'm Really happy Felicity's on workcation. As mean and sad as that is...I'm sure she'd understand it's in the name of hot sex...even if one of the participants happens to be her husband. Thanks for always staying to your update day! Excited to know I can always check here when I expect to get a chapter and get one. Thanks as always.
-Renny