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I tried to review this last night, but it didn't go thru....before I read any further (I just started ch.1), I gotta say, you crack me up!!!! "the whole, I will not have kinky BDSM sex w/a man behind your back", haaaahhaaaa so funny (Jeez, my h key is screwed up), anyways, loving the story so far!

YAY!!! I hope your exams went well XD Geez, that jerk lawyer got Jacob and I all sexually frustrated! Grrrrr... prick... lmao LOVED the update and even tho I love Felicity, I still feel so sorry for Jacob. He deserves love too! Even if Jacob can be an ass... and Phoenix is a sadistic ass... lol ^_^

I haven't got to tell you for a while, how much I
appreciate this two reprobates!!!! Love how they stay
in character!!!!

Thanks!
R

Munez, I love your characters, Why do I feel it more sexual amusement than sexual abuse... I love the way they play pranks on each other... The kid likes wifey too and so it's understandable his degree of guilt, for screwing hubby or for letting hubby screw him.

I love your stories, and can't wait to read more! G

Your story is amazing. I literally just joined AFF because I wanted to be able to review it. Besides it being really, really hot, not to mention your ability to maneuver the plotline, your characters have SOOOOO much more depth than anything else I've read on this site so far (which is quite a lot), and the relationship between Phoenix and Jacob is perfect. It's one of only two stories where I obsessively read old chapters while waiting for the new ones! Thank you soooo much for writing this. I am an eternal fan. P.S. If your characters were real, I would want to hang out with them CONSTANTLY. Well, maybe not Phoenix. Unless he's in one of his scary "playful" moods.

Is it wrong of me for finding Jacob choking on cock so hot? Because, honestly I'm not sure who I'm more in love with, Jacob or Phoenix. Just Phoenix waving his junk around in the laundry room was so hilarious though. a

And Jacob needs to be more aware of the reverse pedophiles. Miranda's gonna be trouble.

And all that aside, I must say it seems to be only a matter of time before Jacob just starts begging to be fucked by Phoenix. And Phoenix will get off on it. Can't wait to read more, and keep up the incredibly, incredibly hot work!

I really wonder about these mysterious notes.It's not like Jacob isn't surrounded by enough crazy people ! LOL And now he is in love with Phoenix.Well, I am as too ! This guy when he is not a total psycho is just so funny.eh eh...I think Miranda is gonna be troubles and I'm alreay having some incontrolable jiggles at the mere thought of jacob new job ! Hilarious chapter as usual !!!

i love this fic! and I like an email notification=D good luck on your exams!

MY GOD!!! That floating five dollar bill had my coffee coming out my nose!!!!
HA! Surprised me there!!!! These two were so made for each other!!!! Thanks for
the laughs!!! (I'll just go get a fresh cup now!!!)

Thanks,
R

Ooh, my first review for this story 8) I can honestly say I've spent the last few hours reading nonstop from chapter one to thirteen. I didn't think the story could BE so good! I'm extremely to have another good story to read.
I would name all the things I really like about this story, but I'm too lazy to. Plus, I forgot. But I do remember a few things: First, Phoenix will never be the same in my vocabulary again. Second, I half want Jacob to have a mental break-down and half want him to just get the F over it. Third, I love you.
You are an awesome author that seriously keeps me at the edge of my seat while also making me feel completely new to sex-scenes in fics. If I could blush when by myself, I totally would.
Thank you very much for writing this much so far! I can't wait to see the next installment.