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for Dandruff

by Munez

person Adrian
schedule June 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Busying myself with re-reading the story while I'm DYING waiting for an update... HOPING against all odds that they somehow wind up together, haha.
They're seriously my favorite couple in the history of fanfiction!!

Anyway, just wanted to say that I forgot how completely AMAZING this story his till I re-read it and fell in love all over again.
schedule June 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It's June and I'm checking again to see if there are any further developments for Jacob and Phoenix. I know I'm selfish and that real life can be trying and complicated but please, please, Please finish "Dandruff". Your story is fantastic and angsty...I'm hooked completely. Please update soon.
person animekid
schedule April 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow thought you died! Shocked to see this still...alive.

Wow....everything is a cluster fuck isn't it? At least you updated something or another.

It's good besides some fucked up HTML or whatever. I was shocked at the ending.
person Udyjay
schedule March 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
don't feel like logging in

just

just fucking update, ok? seriously, update. and please fucking email me. please.

moo moo can walk @ yahoo . com

don't laugh at my email either.
person anonz
schedule March 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i did a literal dance in my room when i saw this updated.

i know how it goes with style changes and the like-- but it's totally still excellent, and this is my fav story on the web.

and i read so much fic. SO MUCH. <3
person DarkSacrifice
schedule March 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
PHOOENIIIIIIX, I loveeeee Phoenix auhahahahha his reaction when hearing Felicity is pregnant wuahahahahah love him man he is my fav of all and I love the fact that he still is the same old bastard <3 <3 please never change it ?:D anyways can you tell us when you will update :( and not a promise and then updating months later =.= anyways please update soon1 thank you very much, I enjoyed the chapterXD
schedule March 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Munez .... Munez ... Muneeeeeeeez
Do you know what I fuckin' hate ....
It's to find a story ( a readable story which I spent hours looking for,,,,, one story with a plot and then WHAME .... I found your story )and then htey don't finish it. So please finish this story ** puppy eyes ** ** Milk and cookies **

Now back to the story I think you made one realistic story to some level although I don't agree that he's actually in love with that prick when he has Ruassell (did I spell it right?)but hey it's your story and I love this story because it's not rainbows and teddy bears and 'let's make love under the moon and let the stars be our witness, for we will be one no matter who stands in our way we will be with each other' bullshit if you ask me and there are some funny moments where I burst out laughing (in the middle of the night mind you)and honestly I have no idea how this is gonna end because normally in stories like this you already figure out the ending but this leaves me on the edge...
What if birdie decided that he wants the kid ?
What if whats her name dies due to complications?
What if he actually ends up with pilot?
What if this is where no one has their happy endings? ( except maybe whats her name with the babie)

And I know with the baby crap coming this is gonna get much worse then better

Bottom line I LOVE THIS STORY PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE I WANT MORE

schedule March 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Bwahahaha now phoenix is really fucked xD
Well I'm happy russell got a fairly happy ending and pilot is really the only one who didn't get to screw Jacob...
I just realized didn't Jacob want pictures to black mail Phoenix with I don't think that whore host guy ever gave him those xD
person thesiner
schedule March 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What a cliffie you dropped, or more like a BOMB! Great story!
schedule March 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ok, so I finally had time to read this without any interruptions! And holy fuck! Felicity's pregnant! What's Phoenix gonna do now??????

Pilot's being a good friend to Jacob. I wonder if Phoenix will be surprised to learn Jacob's staying there. I'm glad Russell didn't end up hating Jacob. I hope in time Russell can forgive him and maybe be friends again.

I love Jupiter; she's such a hoot! I'm glad Felicity had the class not to mention Jacob. Maybe she thinks Phoenix took advantage of Jacob and Jacob's an innocent in all of this?

Anyway, I absolutely LOVED the chapter and I really didn't see your writing style changing. I re-read the previous chapter and didn't notice any changes in writing from that chapter to this one. They all have the same awesomely funny sense of humor that has me cracking up throughout the chapters! lol

Looking forward to the next chapter; hopefully w/in the year? You won't make us wait until 2012 will you?????? hahha