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for Dandruff

by Munez

schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story just keeps getting better and better. I'm only up to chapter 5 I think, and OMG, you are too funny! Just when I think it can't get any better, nope, you surprise me and make it so much better! Between Jacob, (love the name, by the way), the pool boy, Phoenix and Kyle! OMG, now Jacob and Kyle are in cahoots! And Felicity, omg, such a fag hag, I LOVED that statement!!!!! I can't wait to finish the rest of the chapters, wait no I don't, then I'll have withdrawal!!!!
person JT.
schedule June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ashisdjidkloasdjf There are no words to express how much I love this story & Silver Revolver. And Phoenix. What the fuck??? Why is he so great. That whole If I snapped your neck right now I'd still fuck you for a few minutes afterwards while still warm line was just rofl. So in love. And weekly updates sounds sinful. But I like it~
schedule June 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I had this long review and my computer fucked up. Anyway, I just finished the dinner chapter and you are so funny!!!!! Rich Fucks Magazine! Hahahaa! And talking about that drill thing you do with your dick!!!! Hysterical! I was laughing so hard, I couldn't finish the paragraph!!!! So funny! I'm wondering why Phoenix hasn't banged the pool boy, or has he??????
person Anon
schedule June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes, Yay!!!! :D
person Anon
schedule June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great job! I like it when Jacob goes emo:P and grats with you exams! can't wait for another update!
schedule June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sorry about your rough time. Hopefully having the exams over with is going to at the very least save you some trouble. Do you think things'll get better for you now the semester's over? I hope they do. Thanks again for the e-mail letting me know this was up. I've been checking regularly. This was another fun chapter, of course the spanking was the highlight. I think Jaco's just such an adorable little loser. I like how wrapped up in his own mind he's getting. Can't wait to see how the babysitting goes...and his next encounter with his own caretaker or course. Damn! And that secret admirer! So much to look forward to! And yes, as long as you're alright to do them weekly reviews make me a happy girl. Can't wait for more as always!
-Renny
schedule June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hope you did well on your exams!
person tdorian
schedule June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Jacob, I have to say I am as frustrated as he is...He really need some time with Phoenix.eh eh !!! Weekly updates yayyyy !!!
person wynja
schedule June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Damn I've missed this! Weekly updates again? YES! Love you!
schedule June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Jacob was adorable this chapter. He's got it for Phoenix, and he's got it bad. Can't wait to see what the lil pervert Miranda will do when Jacob baby sits. Thanks for the update, and look forward to the next chapter. Well, later.